Translation for Kirito's "Saisei no Asa"

[ritsu]

I completed the romanization and translations for Kirito's "Saisei no Asa" and they are posted here for everyone to review and check over. I'm having the worst time trying to decipher what Kirito means with his song and I feel very shaky with my translations of the third line "aisuru hito no kakera to shirazu kuchi ni fukumu kodomotachi." Kirito

Comments

[sakurak]

Hmm......completely and totally OT, but I was wondering if you'd be able to recommend any award-winning/best seller Japanese fiction books published in 2005 (or 2004)?

[toshi_hakari]

Wow, very nice translation and interpretation *____* I like it very much~ Kirito never ceases to amaze me *__* He´s a very intelligent man~

[polochon]

Maaaah... my answer was too long, and was rejected by lj... So I decided to answer you on my own livejournal, my answer is here: http://www.livejournal.com/users/polochon/53792.html!... )

[accept_me2]

wow...nice song..I haven't heard it but it sounds interesting! ^-^

[yhee]

Hi ^-^ I just stumbled upon your journal. You don't know me, but I've known you and Pierrot HQ since 2001. Many things have changed but it's good to know that some things just stay the same... and as good as they've always been. I just wanted to say THANK YOU ^__^