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river919

Life, Later (5/?)

Sep 29, 2009 20:08

Title: Life, Later (5/?)

Pairing: Pepa/Silvia (LHDP)

Rating: PG-13 for now (it’ll maybe get racier down the line)

Spoilers: Yup, if you haven’t seen the earlier pre-Pepa episodes (season 3). So basically, this will be a kind of half-AU.

A/N: Read, enjoy & comment! :-)

5.

Name of the operation: (START) SEDUCING THE PELIRROJA (TO THE DARK ( Read more... )

pepa silvia fanfiction

Comments 14

lovelyafterglow September 29 2009, 20:15:03 UTC

"Sade didn’t have me in mind when she sang ‘Smooth Operator’" -- This, had me laughing out loud. (And now I have that song stuck in my head, too.)

And the teenager with a black-painted room...hahahaha...my sister somehow got my parents to let her do just that when she was like 16. To this day I'm still not sure how she pulled that one off.

Great chapter, river!!

river919 September 30 2009, 09:19:10 UTC

LOL It's a great song though not one of my favourites of theirs, wouldn't like having it stuck in my head. :-)
I've teased my parents for years that I'd paint my room either gray or black, never did though. Go your sister!
Thanks for reading & commenting. Enjoy part 6. :-)

slayergirl13 September 29 2009, 20:37:34 UTC

excellent update. I loved Pepa's nervous rambling to self, so perfect. It was all so sweet.

river919 September 30 2009, 09:21:08 UTC

Thank you. Rambly Pepa is fun to write. :-) Enjoy the next parts.

selinakris September 29 2009, 21:57:40 UTC

this chapter had me in stitches, and i love rambling Pepa. so cute.

river919 September 30 2009, 09:22:35 UTC

Glad you got a couple of laughs outta it. ;-) That's the intention. Thank you for reading & commenting.

qosmio18 September 30 2009, 00:00:30 UTC

Hahahahaha. It reminds me of when Silvia had her mood swings. One minute happy the next crying.

Aww poor Pepa. Trying her hardest to make Silvia feel better.

And Montoya no matter on the show or in fan fics, is so clueless.

Great chapter. Now I have to disengage from my phone. My eyes are killing me. LOL

Can't wait for 6.

river919 September 30 2009, 09:26:15 UTC

Oh yeah, loved Silvia in the throes of hormones that episode too. :-) Montoya is portrayed as clueless everywhere, poor guy, and he did try so hard to be what Silvia wanted, but he never had snowball's chance in hell. :-)
Take care of them eyes. :-) Thanks for reading & commenting. Enjoy part 6.

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river919 September 30 2009, 09:29:37 UTC

Glad you liked it and that it felt true to the PepSi spirit. :-) Operation Seduction of the Pelirroja is underway. Thank you for reading & commenting. :-)