pink carnation

May 12, 2004 07:08

I sat on the train restlessly tapping my foot with a long stem flower resting on my lap. I couldn't wait to see his darling blushing cheeks when he would lean in to smell the pink carnation. I wore a button-down collared shirt because I wasn't sure if I was suppose to look professional for this sort of thing. My hair was stuffed into a side-ways ( Read more... )

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writergno May 12 2004, 23:30:16 UTC
no one leaves me this many comments. youre famous.

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rockstopkidz May 13 2004, 08:37:56 UTC
they make me feel so validated.

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writergno May 12 2004, 23:34:50 UTC
love the fourth graf.

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calichillout May 13 2004, 00:30:54 UTC
I'm so sorry buddy. That really sucks. It's interesting...you'll meet a lot of guys like that in Chicago. It's weird how they can be. Very self-involved and they don't understand the emotions of others...sucks. Like someone else said, you're a great writer though! Honestly, you should write a book or something:-) You're so good! Dude, when are you coming back to CA? Coming north then?

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birds_sing4all May 14 2004, 04:53:39 UTC
If only more people could ever experience what you call a stunt... there´d be way more happy faces around. Dont feel you´ve made a mistake while going along with your heart, Beau
xx

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anonymous May 14 2004, 17:30:45 UTC
carnations are cheap. mayb it was that.

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rockstopkidz May 14 2004, 18:43:29 UTC
maybe.

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writergno May 14 2004, 21:38:40 UTC
and so is beauzie.

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writergno May 14 2004, 21:38:20 UTC
carnations are beautiful.

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