pink carnation

[rockstopkidz]

I sat on the train restlessly tapping my foot with a long stem flower resting on my lap. I couldn't wait to see his darling blushing cheeks when he would lean in to smell the pink carnation. I wore a button-down collared shirt because I wasn't sure if I was suppose to look professional for this sort of thing. My hair was stuffed into a side-ways

Comments

[cay_leb]

"this is how a bounced check must feel"

man oh man.

[rockstopkidz]

oh i know huh

hey

[lets_just_dance]

hey beau...we need to really hang out sometime now that your down here in cali...yay...hope to see you soon...i'll call you someitme K!...or u can call me...ttyl hun...xoxo

Re: hey

[rockstopkidz]

xoxo

[rockstopkidz]

That comment made me want to cream my shorts.

[writergno]

look what my fortune cookie had to say..

[rockstopkidz]

oh my! lol

Feel better.......

[keatsmuse]

Look on the bright side! You're a very bright person- he's missing out. One more thing....Between two of your paragraphs you wrote "maybe he didn't beleive I came to see him. It almost sounds like you were talking about the bum on the train because of the placement of that paragraph. Anyway, I hope you feel better!