henceforth declaring a mortatorium on poultry

[romancandles]

Oh, how the mighty have fallen. This fic was supposed to purely silly to finally shake my chicken obsession but then it got kind of overtaken as I tried parse out my interpretations of both Mark and Eduardo and then it was again overtaken by pretty dudes hooking up so

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[gdgdbaby]

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SOBS LOUDLY AND WITH ABANDON

WHY IS THIS THE CUTEST rolls around lkfjaskdfjasd *______*

[gdgdbaby]

ALSO i am not a creep i swear! underhand_glory linked me to this n____n

[romancandles]

LOL I AM SORRY YOU ARE WEEPING? Ugh they are just homo unicorns I can not even handle their faces and their obvious love.

Also, omg w/e w/e even if you were a creep, that's what the internet's for - I would know because I actually creep professionally.

[gdgdbaby]

HAPPY TEARS, HAPPY TEARS

AND LMAO OMG what even, where can i sign up for this job n__n i want to be paid for creeping

[underhand_glory]

ugh ugh i love your shit so much. i still remember fangirling over your vmars fic 9 million years ago YOU ARE LITERALLY MY FAVOURITE

omg the handholding and jesse hyperventilating during sex and andrew's neckkk. character bleed is my favourite always

[romancandles]

UGH OMG my VMars fic UGH has it really been that long since we've shared a fandom lol.

ugh jesse is so emotional i can't even. he needs andrew to keep him from flipping his shit.

[redinteriors]

W/E W/E I ALREADY GAVE YOU ALL MY FEEDBACK BUT UGH REALLY I THINK THIS IS LOVELY AND GR8 AND I LOVE IT AND I LOVE YOU AND W/E THIS IS AN ENTIRELY SUPERFLUOUS COMMENT BECAUSE YOU ALREADY KNOW HOW OBSESSED WITH YOU AND YOUR FIC I AM ETC

But no really I love the how the humour is balanced with the meta, and I love all the little details you put into the making out HNNNNNNG plus slightly drunk hooking up is the gr8est and the tone and feel of this is super natural and intimate.

♥

[romancandles]

TELL ME MORE, SISI. FEED MY EGO. Ugh thanks for reading it like three times and listening to me be INSANE although srsly you are currently watching Zuck videos so maybe you have no room to judge omg.

Ugh LOL I AM GLAD THAT I COULD SURPRISE YOU WITH A HANDJOB.

[redinteriors]

LOL OMG SHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH WHY DID YOU BROADCAST THAT FACT UGH OMG I DON'T KNOW WHAT I'M DOING WITH MY LIFE ANYMORE /rolls around with face in hands

Ugh lolllll it was a pleasure to read it through for you and w/e w/e my life would be EMPTY without your insanity so shut your hole YOU ARE NEVER GETTING RID OF ME, BASICALLY.

AHAHA AND WHAT A GR8 SURPRISE IT WAS ♥ ugh life should be filled with surprise handjobs and sweet looking homosexuals hooking up that is all anybody wants, really.

[partaken]

morgan i think we need to sit down and have a talk about how you need to write for this fandom forever and always

i am so bad at reviewing shit, but i love what you've done here, exploring both the motives of the character in movie itself and also jesse and andrew's ridiculously large mutual crush. fkjsk it is just really great and i love it why am i trying to give a coherent review when i am so bad at it, and my genuine reaction to this fic was to bury my head into my hands and giggle a lot of the time?

TL;DR: I LOVE IT, GIVE ME MORE

[romancandles]

ugh omg ugh i can't handle how much jesse and andrew love each other okay. they're like a cross between a basket of fuzz ball kittens and that sickeningly adorable couple that speak in tandem ugh and you're in a bar with them with plenty of free seats but they sit in each other's laps and feed each other french fries.

burying my face in my hands and giggling his pretty much how i respond to them as well. ♥

[learnthemusic]

I can't even figure out what to say, so I'm just gonna babble.

Guhhh, this was so amazing. I love the aspects of Jesse's character that shine through this - his insecurity, etc, like he’s only half a dozen steps from shattering. I love the ease with which they start kissing; quite obviously not the first time. I especially loved this about Andrew: Andrew never does anything by halves; he wants it all at once and once he has that, he wants more of Jesse. And even though Jesse started it, Andrew finishes it and it's kinda great.

Their going over lines is pretty fantastic too. Andrew's trying so hard to keep a straight face and Jesse has to go and ruin it. Man, I don't even know what else to say. If I could quote this all and not exceed the LJ-comment limit thing, I would.

This was greatly orgasmic :P

[romancandles]

I'm so glad you liked it! I really started it to talk about why exactly I found the chicken so hilarious but then the whole thing got away from me when I found out I wanted to start talking about how Jesse and Andrew kind of oddly fit together despite the major differences in their personalities and the way they might have approached their respective characters. I think it's pretty clear that each identifies pretty deeply with his character so I love the idea of trying to figure out what was going through their minds when they did certain scenes.