henceforth declaring a mortatorium on poultry

[romancandles]

Oh, how the mighty have fallen. This fic was supposed to purely silly to finally shake my chicken obsession but then it got kind of overtaken as I tried parse out my interpretations of both Mark and Eduardo and then it was again overtaken by pretty dudes hooking up so

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[romancandles]

I AM SORRY THAT THE CHICKEN LINE IS SO AMAZING AND RIDICULOUS. Ugh I seriously can't imagine them reading the lines for the first time and not laughing and then when Jesse talked about going through that first reading and Andrew making it funny even though Jesse had never thought that Andrew's part would be funny just cinched it for me.

[shecrows]

OH MY GOD LOOK AT ME CHECKING LJ AND BEING PROFOUNDLY GLAD THAT I HAVE DONE SO

ugh, god, this is so incredibly fluid. the transitions--from one thought to the next, from one movement to the next--are so seamless that i barely notice them, it's just this perfect, complete-yet-incomplete, snapshot of a series of moments, and i am seriously in awe of how rich you manage to make each one of those moments. i am in love with your diction and your choice of details; i feel like you just intuitively know which details are relevant, and it's not that they complement the scene, they make it. jfc, you writing is just so, so fucking good.

TL;DR YOU ARE MY FAVORITE.

(GOD THIS FANDOM IS SO FUCKING META. and omg omg lines blurring between the actors and the characters SO HAPPY YOU MADE THAT A FOCUS ugh you are perfect.)

[romancandles]

OMG CAMILLE HI.

ugh omg i am glad you liked because i was debating leaving in your ask and then was like "IS THAT TOO DESPERATE?" and the answer is probably yes but i don't care w/e w/e feed my narcissism, bitch. ugh anyway yes i am really trying to get away from the type of fic that is very dialog heavy without much prose because i think it made me a really lazy writer. i'm pretty good at dreaming up amusing dialog (obviously because i am a hilarious clever bitch) but i really let my prose fall to the wayside and i was worried that people would be like TL;DR so THANK YOU FOR READING IT AND MAKING ME FEEL BETTER.

UGH ALL THE BLURRING LINES i need to write a homo fic about how during the really times around the really high intensity scenes they were always snapping at each other and jesse was walking all over andrew all the time and andrew just kept taking it, becoming more and more frustrated ugh and then there's a fight and some angst and then, as usual, some blowjobs.

[nikkikoala90]

Oh my GAWD. THIS WAS AMAZING.
YOU ARE AMAZING.
Seriously, this is so good. Like, perfect.
I wish I was coherent enough for a better review xD
But, really, these are the most perfect Andrew/Jesse characters I have probably ever read. And the imagery in which you did everything - the lights in Andrew's hair, Andrew kissing like a kid in the candy store, Jesse feeling like he could shatter at any moment. Seriously amazing.

And I love that you always incorporate chickens.
I REALLY LOVE IT.

Ahem. Please write more :)

[romancandles]

thank you! I'm so happy it worked for you because this is my first foray into RPF that isn't total absurd crack involving cats or something so I was a bit nervous posting it.

I am trying to get away from the chicken omg. THERE WILL BE NO CHICKENS IN THE NEXT FIC. Just depression.

[marycontraire]

THIS IS DARLING, YOU ARE A DARLING. I especially love Andrew cracking up over the chicken line, and your Jesse voice.

[romancandles]

UGH YOU KNOW ANDREW READ THAT SHIT AND DIED LAUGHING. "WHY IS EDUARDO SO OBSESSED WITH ANIMALS?"

[melkerr]

This is beautiful, the intimacy is just... I don't even know where to begin, I would probably just end up quoting the whole thing back to you :D Brilliant!! They are SO freakin' adorable!

[romancandles]

Thank you so much!