One Drop Too Few

[irespressogirl]

Challenge Twenty-One: Winter Holidays Past
Title: One Drop Too Few
Author: irespressogirl
Wizard/Witch: Sirius Black/Marlene McKinnon
Rating/Warnings: PG-13/R
Genre: Romance/Humour
Word count: Exactly 500
Prompt: 24. molten gold Felix Felicis
Summary: Sirius needs a bit of luck, but he doesn't get the kind he expects.

Comments

[seaislewitch]

You have Sirius and James down pat. It's really amusing and fun.

Excellent!

[irespressogirl]

Thank you! They are very fun to write. I love their interactions, and it's good they can give it as well as receive it.

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading!

[seaislewitch]

Honestly, the characterizations were so on the mark with my personal canon. Excellent!

[lewlinx]

True to form! Padfoot and Prongs are just down pat perfect!
I just so feel for Sirius, sometimes his cockiness gets the better of him! LOL
Nicely done!

[irespressogirl]

Thank you! I love to write the pair of them. He is pretty over-confident. Thought he knew what he was doing with Felix, but it turned out he was over-cautious. That rarely happens, lol.

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading!

[closetravenclaw]

LOL. Busted--twice, it would seem. Sirius may actually prefer to be bitten by a mackled malaclaw now than face Marlene's wrath.

[irespressogirl]

Ha! Well, I doubt Sirius would be attracted to her were she not feisty and likely to bite his head off if he stepped out of line.

Thanks for reading!

[beffeysue]

Poor Sirius. He might just as well have been bitten by a mackled malaclaw.

[irespressogirl]

Ah, he got the short end of the stick, I reckon, but it was definitely his own fault!

Thanks for reading!

[redvelvetcanopy]

Brilliant! Sirius and James are just perfect. I'm glad Marlene was there to set them straight!

[irespressogirl]

Thank you! Sirius & James are fun to write together. They play off of one another so well. And Marlene has a great strong personality.

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading!