Fic: Missing Breath (by perspi)

[perspi]

Title: Missing Breath
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Comments

[liviapenn]

*snifs* Oh, this was wonderful. Better and more painful than the way things turned out in canon. Good on Ronon for being so loyal and wise. *hugs them all*

[perspi]

Thank you so much!

[darkrosetiger]

Wow.

This was amazing. I can't say what I loved best, because I loved the whole thing--though the moment when Ronon realized that John and Rodney were waiting up for him too was just beautiful.

[perspi]

Oh, thank you! I *wibbled* a bit when John and Rodney told mme about that, too.

[almostnever]

This is a remarkable story... I really felt the suspense. Ronon's unwavering feelings are evident in every line. I love the team this way; thank you for sharing it here.

[perspi]

Thank you so much for reading, and for the lovely comment! pentapus's prompts really gave me an excellent start. :)

[siriaeve]

Oh, this is fantastic. My heart hurts for Teyla, and your Ronon is awesome.

[perspi]

Thank you! I really wanted Teyla to be hard and vicious, and I needed something big to get her there. And writing this has really made me love Ronon as a writer--it's given me a couple more plotbunnies for Ronon-centric stories. *g*

[atlantisgrrrl]

Wow, this is so powerful! You really made this hurt and then made it all better in a way that felt very real. Also

Ronon crosses his arms and glares at John. "I was never going to hurt Kavanagh."

THANK YOU!

[perspi]

Oh, thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it--I was a bit unsure how the angst would go over. :)

I rewatched that episode with Kavanagh while writing this--It just seemed so off.