fic | axel/roxas | a cautionary tale

[ronsard]

Title: A Cautionary Tale
Fandom: Kingdom Hearts
Pairing: Axel/Roxas, chiefly
Rating: R
Summary: Veins full of light, he's one to stray. Pre-KH2.
Warning: I started writing this way before Days came out, so Xion doesn't exist. Hell, I started this in early 2008 so Xion probably didn't even exist in Nomura's mind at the time. I doubt anyone will have

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[empath_eia]

MORE HEARTS HERE because I can

Also I love the thing with the halos and the ribcage, I paused to picture that for a good fifteen seconds before continuing.

AND SORA'S DOOR. BUH. That bit was masterful. When I realized what was going on I flailed a lot, jsyk.

Anyway I love this story and should probably shut up now before I embarrass myself.

[ronsard]

ALL YOUR HEARTS ARE BELONG TO ME.

I like that paragraph best out of this entire thing, when I dug it out of the cobwebbed pile of old wips I was surprised by the quality of prose I used to be able to achieve. Trying to write in the same style I used 3 years ago was really hard :(

Good good, I was afraid that part was too weird and nonsensical. In a way it toes that line...

[empath_eia]

lol researching dreams and dream logic is my hobby, it was nowhere near nonsensical enough to throw me, and I love weird. So much.

These last couple of years seem to have been strangely hard on creative types; a very large portion of my flist (including me) have found it very difficult to make things we like, or even make things at all. I'm slamming my head into the creative block full-speed because I hate hate hate not being able to write, but it's really really stubborn. :\

PS: Do you still want that Itachi + cat people fic? Because I wrote some of it and it was kind of weird and off-balance but if you still want it I will try to finish it. :3

[ronsard]

I wholly support this resolution to get back into writing. I'm still having difficulties as I struggle with fics for new fandoms which is always a nightmare and makes me want to go hide in my old fandoms instead. I've enjoyed the Ita/Shi fics I've been writing but seriously there should be a limit. Left to my own accord I'd probably write that all the time.

HELL YES I WANT THAT. You promised. Give that to us, love, because it is our birthday and we wantsesssss it.

[ronsard]

I think the Organization alone provides at least 2/3 of the "darkness" in KH. The rest is probably Riku and Maleficent. But all that back-stabbing and manipulation at Castle Oblivion aren't exactly family friendly. One of the things that I disliked (out of many, many things) about Days is that it made Roxas less badass than he optimally could have been :(

Ah, the prince. You're actually pretty close already, his name is in your comment ;)

[metafictionally]

/camps in your brain permanently. :)

[ronsard]

Be careful, that neighborhood's pretty damn sketchy XD

[venusian_eye]

On the verge of tears, so, in order to avoid talking at obnoxious length how you are turning me into a diehard shipper and how, precisely, you rocked my world today, I want to inflict this on you:

[ronsard]

OMG THIS IS SO TRUE. Also moar fsts would be ace.

[rikelle]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rXzi93yJz1I
Thiiiiiis It's the same song (essentially. No, really.) but more electronic-ee <3

[canadino]

WHY.

You remind me why I keep writing.

[ronsard]

/luminous blush