Comments | ronsard: fic | axel/roxas

ronsard

fic | axel/roxas | a cautionary tale

Feb 24, 2011 00:03

Title: A Cautionary Tale
Fandom: Kingdom Hearts
Pairing: Axel/Roxas, chiefly
Rating: R
Summary: Veins full of light, he's one to stray. Pre-KH2.
Warning: I started writing this way before Days came out, so Xion doesn't exist. Hell, I started this in early 2008 so Xion probably didn't even exist in Nomura's mind at the time. I doubt anyone will have ( Read more... )

axel/roxas, fic, slash, kh

Comments 25

(The comment has been removed)

ronsard February 24 2011, 22:59:25 UTC

What? You object to my casual fling with an old favorite? ;)

lettersandliars February 25 2011, 03:59:18 UTC

Obligatory lurker dropping in to say: Oh, my heart. This is fantastic. I love how violent and sort-of fucked up Roxas is here, because that's kind of how he is in my headcanon. The line about Sora's crown being so heavy it should crack is neck is really striking, also.

ronsard February 25 2011, 23:29:17 UTC

Ah, those heavy-handed ~symbolic~ moments. Glad you liked it, I took Roxas's character a bit further than is usual even for me, but it was fun.

gold_panner February 25 2011, 14:12:19 UTC

I'm still reeling a little! And such pretty language...

As an aside, I miss that era of akuroku so much :C I wish everyone just kept their old headcanon Roxas, like you did...

ronsard February 25 2011, 23:30:06 UTC

All smoke and mirror, bb, all smoke and mirror. Behind all them ~glamorous~ sentences I got nuthin' :(

theirempires February 27 2011, 11:13:15 UTC

You probably won't even see this comment for its tardiness, but oh my gosh woman, what is this magnificent piece you have given to the world? *_____*

I am in love with your prose from beginning to end, which clearly means that your writing hasn't deteriorated. Ugh, what to say... Every time I read this pairing from you, I want to play the actual game to see what it's all about because their relationship is so sublimely fucked up and I adore it. Loveyouloveyouloveyou. Okay, off to catch up on the rest of the fics that you have posted! ♥

ronsard March 1 2011, 05:56:08 UTC

If I hadn't sat on it for three million years perhaps it wouldn't seem so weird and out of place. Well, it would still be weird, but might at least make some sense in canonical context. Yeah, deteriorated isn't the right word... if anything my writing has bloated up over the years.

Um, no, don't do that. Well, don't bother anyway, I haven't written anything of value in recent memory >.>