[Uraboku] Bruises and Bitemarks (2/?)

[rooftop_sakura]

Title: Bruises and Bitemarks
Author: masanami
Character(s): Hotsuma/Shusei, mentions of Senshirou/Kuroto, Takashiro, Tachibana, and others
Word Count: 9,050
Rating: R
Warnings: Host AU. Suggestive material.
Summary: Shusei's the perfect host and Hotsuma's the perfect person to ruin everything for him.

Comments

[haru_kurofai]

Honey, you have made my day ♥ *glomps* I've been looking forward to your fic for sooooooooo long, and it has definitely carried me through yet another shitty day at work ♥ You know, it didnt feel like 9000 words at all! The lines just flowed so perfectly, I could see the scenes clearly in my head, and it all happened so naturally. Everything seemed so right ♥

Kuroto is adorable ♥♥♥ and hello Sen-chan XDDDD Kuroto's tsundere moments are so much love *giggles*

I really really love the way Hotsu waited for Shusei outside, the way he thought Shusei was out of reach yet he still tried his best to get close to him *swoons* Shusei letting his masks slip in front of Hotsu, that's certainly a good sign for the beginning of Hotsu x Shusei love ♥

Excuse my mushy brain and incoherent comment right now, bb you're amazing ♥♥♥♥ *clings* (time to get writing XDDD before bedtime orz)

[masanami]

*clings* ♥ !!

Ahhh I'm SO sorry for the long wait too! I don't know what happened but I just got carried away and before I knew it I had reached 9,000 words! I never write such long chapters for multi-chapter fics! Hopefully I won't go so crazy next time and get the chapter out a bit quicker^^ I'm glad it didn't seem too long. I hate those writings where it just feels like it will never end and it just carries on pointlessly...and I was a bit worried that might happen orz

I'm glad you enjoyed Kuroto and Senshirou's scene! Haha I had to include some tsundere Kuroto in there because he is so cute~ of course, plenty of HotsuShu as well ♥ ♥

Thank you so much! I appreciate your thoughts and words like whoah! ajhsakjhd I am so excited for this new writing from YOU! *sends you lots of inspiration*

[haru_kurofai]

Ehehe ♥ *glomps back*

Don't be sorry at all bb! It's certainly worth the wait, and I'm looking forward to more! Everyone are so in-character, and Sen-chan too! I feel sorry for him sometimes... Tsundere Kuroto is love, but Sen-chan deserves some tender loving care too! I hope he gets plenty behind closed doors ♥ *giggles*

Thank you for sending me loads of inspirations XD I value your words and thoughts so much, together with a few other special people (♥), every time I write something I wonder if you girls would like it ♥ And I refresh my post like mad to wait for your feedback cos it means so much to me *hugs*

[masanami]

ahhh I feel sorry for Senshirou too! Poor boy just loves that tsundere to pieces though :) and I love him for it LOL

Oh sweetheart you are the most precious! I am SO the same way with my special people as well (you, of course, being one ♥) and I wait for your opinions more so than anyone else--because it would make nothing but happy to know you simply enjoyed something I wrote :) *hugs tightly*

[lulubg]

Sorry I haven't commented before.. but I'm really loving this fic!!

I'm looking forward to more!! :)

[masanami]

Thank you dear! I'm so glad you're enjoying it :)

[megzter]

yippee! thanks for the 2nd chapter! it was interesting seeing things from shusei's perspective this time.
aww, hotsuma patiently waiting outside so he can ask him out on a date ^_^. after reading the fic, i'm craving a bowl of miso soup now!

[masanami]

gosh so sorry for not replying to this comment until now! orz for some reason I could have sworn I already had... =\

Anyway, thank you so much for reading! It really makes me happy that there are those looking forward to these updates and seeing how the story progresses^^ It surely means a lot to me :)

[mitsu_san]

Ahhhh I finally read this chapter <333

[masanami]

GAH! Mitsu-channnn! Why did I think I'd already responded to this comment? I remember reading it and I was sure I had replied to it..../masanami fail moment!

Thank you so much for your words! I love that the story is interesting to you and that the inclusion of some other characters were a surprise^^ of course I don't want them to take away from the main theme of HOTSUSHU LOVE (haha) but they have important roles to play as well <333

The scenes with Hotsuma and Shusei were SO hard for me to write so the fact that you enjoyed those and they made you smile---asjdjakshdjkha makes me very happy!!

What I like of your writing style is, that there is not "too much and not too little" in your descripion and dialogues. It balanced well between the thoughts and the flow of emotions along with the happenings and conversations. The plot doesn't seem too slow or too fast to me, I think that's the right explanation hahah ^^.

gaaaaah *bluuush* SUCH A COMPLIMENT!! ♥ ♥ ♥

ILU darling~

[masanami]

Tachibana ♥ the man who knows those boys the best and how to best take advantage of them

[masanami]

Hm, I wonder how Yuki, Luka and the siblings will come into play.

Hope you enjoy finding out^^ I tried to make their roles recreative and believable with their personalities so...we'll see!

Thank you for all the lovely comments! I'm really glad you've been enjoying the fic ♥