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[Hetalia] Deception

Dec 23, 2009 12:34

Title: Deception
Author: masanami
Character(s): Denmark/Sweden
Word Count: 920
Rating: PG-13
Timeline: Kalmar Union
Warnings: None.
Summary: Sweden and Denmark in the heat of battle.
Author's Note: Written for nordic5_xmas 's holiday exchange. Special thanks to blulious for her wonderful work as a beta reader.

( Denmark is always confident and something has made him more certain than ever that he is going to get his way on this day as well. )

type: one-shot, pairing: denmark/sweden

Comments 19

madnesshp December 23 2009, 18:48:45 UTC

DAMN. I love your Denmark and Sweden tension!fics. I really really do. Best of all, you capture Denmark's stubborn cockiness so incredibly well. Ahhh. AHHH. All your fault that I crave more!

Here, damn it!! I'm showering you with love and confetti and sunshine ☆ ♥ ~*~♥☆ ~!

masanami December 23 2009, 19:30:06 UTC

Oh boy. I do like the tension and angst like no other. It's just so much fun to explore all the different possible avenues of their relationship. So much tension! <3

And I will gladly take the blame for making you want more DenSu!! Muhahaha <3

taiyou_to_tsuki December 23 2009, 19:41:06 UTC

OH OH IT'S LIKE A BIRTHDAY PRESENT

ONLY IT'S CHRISTMAS TOMORROW

YAY

*Excited*

I don't really have much more to say except DenSu: poster pairing for UST. You know it's true.

masanami December 24 2009, 03:48:38 UTC

It's true. A fact that cannot be denied.

*feels the need to relieve that tension fanfic style* LOL my dirty mind....

taiyou_to_tsuki December 24 2009, 18:42:27 UTC

Do it or I'll have to write some awful, awful PWP myself. You don't want that.

masanami December 24 2009, 22:48:12 UTC

Let's both do it. There is nothing wrong with doubling up on the PWP LOL

aoi_aka December 23 2009, 20:09:44 UTC

Such an awesome way of fighting. I love how well you describe Sweden's vision without his glasses and how even though he's half-blind, he can still plan, calculate, and predict Denmark.

masanami December 24 2009, 03:49:56 UTC

Thank you very much! I don't know why but I like the metaphorical comparison of Sweden's feelings and his vision in this one...and I found it interesting to write them out in relationship to their fighting, movements, etc.

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masanami December 24 2009, 03:52:34 UTC

Yes, yes, I've got to agree--especially during that time period. And thank you so much (geez you've been giving me so many nice compliments lately *blushes*) I love writing for Sweden and I'm so happy he comes across well. And Denmark is just fun to write! <3

hopelessosaka December 25 2009, 17:05:56 UTC

Sweden and Denmark in the heat of battle.

Sexy, sexy battle.

I love Sweden's responses in this one, in particular, both in how he reacts to Denmark's movements and how he replies, short and to the point of exactly what he wants to get across, which you pulled off fantastically, as usual. ;w;♥

Lots of Christmas-smothered love to you, okay?

masanami December 26 2009, 17:44:36 UTC

Thanks so much <3

Smexy battles are the best. and I'm always glad to know my Sweden and Denmark characterization comes out well--I certainly try! :)

I hope you had lots of Christmas lovin' too! <333