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[Hetalia] Revolutionary Lines :: Chapter 10

Jan 04, 2010 22:48

Title: Revolutionary Lines
Author: masanami
Character(s): England/America, Prussia, France, Spain, Canada, Romano
Word Count: 5,506
Rating: R
Genre: Drama
Timeline: American Revolution
Warnings: Graphic, angst, dark, explicit
Summary: England becomes aware of changes in young America, making him begin to see the growing colony in a different light and ( Read more... )

fic series: revolutionary lines, pairing: england/america, type: multi-chapter, series: hetalia

Comments 21

star_jinin January 5 2010, 05:19:13 UTC

EEEEEE I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU'RE JUST GOING TO LEAVE US HANGING LIKE THAT. That was EVIL. Even worse than the one madnesship left on IT! aljflks;jfskldjfsdl;kjf

Well, of course he doesn't die, but IGGYSUUUUUUU

And we finally get Francis in! SWEET. Wonder how he's going to explain himself to Canada...yeah, we're helping your brother leave the family 'cause England and I have some problems. Can't see that going over too well.

As always, I'm really glad you're writing this fic, as there's honestly not that many Rev war fics where US and UK interact on the battlefield.

And Prussia...why so awesome? :D

masanami January 9 2010, 23:12:12 UTC

So sorry hun! I had to have a little dramatic effect, you know? <3

But...the wait for the next chapter won't be long. Promise :)

Thanks for the lovely comment!

efronzarabbit January 5 2010, 05:56:51 UTC

uugghhhh you left me on a sickening cliffhanger! but iv been waiting for the next chapter! has been awhile and i hope you update soon! still very atached to this story, prolly the most intense chapter yet now that the real fighting has begun :D

masanami January 9 2010, 23:12:57 UTC

Will do. I'm going to be updating with the next chapter probably in the next week or two! It won't be a long wait at all <333

ahmerst January 5 2010, 07:58:29 UTC

I'm so happy I decided to pop onto LJ before heading to bed! This is definitely my favorite chapter so far, I love how France is like "CRACKA-POW, IT IS ME, FRANCE!" and Canada goes running to him. Also, bad ass England is always something I adore in a fic. Can't wait for the next part, as always! ♥

masanami January 9 2010, 23:13:28 UTC

Woohoo! I'm glad you liked it lovely. Thanks so much.

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masanami January 9 2010, 23:14:00 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. I promise it won't be long until the next update!!

blulious January 5 2010, 14:22:26 UTC

I was reminded of this fic when I was watching "Revolutionary Road", which had nothing to do with the American Revolutionary War!! *laughs* Ack, I didn't get to beta this version (busy, busy) but I'm sure that your writing doesn't need my feeble opinions, ne?

So happy you've decided to post a short summary of the previous chapter, it really helps things move along (very clever)! And the shift of views (from Prussia in your earlier draft) to America really makes him the central figure. That was a good move and I'm so glad you found it on your own!!

I see the height issue was solved, because now America feels REPRESENTATIONALLY shorter to Prussia. I'm not sure if you've made them the same height in this universe but that interior comparison surely made up for any hiccups on the canon-data.

LOL, PRUSSIA WITH HIS PIMP-CANE!!!! XDDDD Gosh, I adore you ( ... )

masanami January 9 2010, 23:15:52 UTC

Hahaha...I think of that movie too whenever I think of the title of this fic, but only because the titles are kinda similar. And no worries, I was sure you were really busy!

Prussia with his pimp cane was one of my favorite parts /dies

ahhhh you say such nice things. thank you so much honey, you know I appreciate it!