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[Katekyo Hitman Reborn] Affinity

Jan 26, 2010 22:51

Title: Affinity
Author: masanami
Character(s): Yamamoto/Hibari
Word Count: 1,494
Rating: R
Warnings: Non-explicit sex
Summary: 46 sentences about Yamamoto and Hibari's relationship.
Author's Note: This was fun and good writing practice, even though I really had to get creative with the structure of some of those sentences!

( Hibari refuses to be bound to anyone, including Yamamoto Takeshi. )

pairing: yamamoto/hibari, type: one-shot, series: katekyo hitman reborn

Comments 31

Baseball Herbivore ahmerst January 27 2010, 05:16:01 UTC

YOU BEAUTIFUL STAR, YOU.

All these sentences are so delicious and wonderful! You and your insurmountable talent, always so inspiring!

I love the first sentence and the second to last best of all.

Re: Baseball Herbivore masanami January 27 2010, 05:21:37 UTC

HIBARI IS SO COOL.

He has such a badass way of thinking with his one-track mind. Favorite phrase: "I'll bite you to death" and whenever he calls people "herbivores". Cuz he's a predator like that, you know.

Awwww thanks so much, lovely. You should try doing one of these one sentence things! It's fun, simple, and doesn't take very long. Plus, its good writing practice <3

I really like the first one too--its one of my favorites.

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masanami January 27 2010, 23:59:41 UTC

Thank you very much for reading and commenting! Issues are definitely what make it fun--if everything was perfect then it wouldn't be any fun, you know? I'm glad they follow into the 8018 dynamic, especially since they were so short that it was kind of a challenge.

I'M MELTING~ miawpyon January 27 2010, 09:17:19 UTC

sweeeeet <3
I love that Hibari being so Hibari and Yamamoto understand him so well. Thank you for writing such a wonderful fic. *melt completely*

Re: I'M MELTING~ masanami January 28 2010, 00:01:09 UTC

Thank so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed them. Was there one in particular that you liked best? *trying to see what works well for future fics with them*

This was a very fun little fic to write <3

Re: I'M MELTING~ miawpyon January 28 2010, 01:06:52 UTC

I like them all but if you ask me to choose, I like Confusion & Emotion the best.
I'll be waiting for your next 8018 fics xDDD

Re: I'M MELTING~ masanami January 29 2010, 06:29:30 UTC

Thanks so much for letting me know!

Totally more 8018 to come from me <3

kaiaaya January 27 2010, 11:30:50 UTC

I heart! Each snippet contained so much feelings. My personal favorite is Exception -- so true.

Nice piece :)

masanami January 28 2010, 00:01:53 UTC

Thanks so much for reading!! I'm glad you enjoyed them. It really is hard to get all that emotion in one sentence--I was worried some of them would fall short!

chinpirako January 27 2010, 16:39:48 UTC

That was so sweet....I just love Yamamoto x Hibari, and you definitely did a good work here!

masanami January 28 2010, 00:03:20 UTC

Yay for 8018! They are so my OTP and I'm glad they came across well. Was there one you liked in particular? *researches for future fics with them*

Thanks for reading!

chinpirako January 29 2010, 01:37:22 UTC

8018 is my OTP too!!

I like quite many. I'll try not to write a huge list down, so....the ones I like the best are: "Battleground", "Cloth", "Drift", "Need", "Intimate", "Time " and "Affection"

masanami January 29 2010, 06:30:20 UTC

8018 is <3 I can't get enough of them :)

Thanks for letting me know which ones you liked the best! That totally helps <333