[Hetalia] Revolutionary Lines :: Chapter 12

[rooftop_sakura]

Title: Revolutionary Lines
Author: masanami
Character(s): England/America, Prussia, France, Spain, Canada, Romano
Word Count: 3,878
Rating: R
Genre: Drama
Timeline: American Revolution
Warnings: Graphic, angst, dark, explicit
Summary: England becomes aware of changes in young America, making him begin to see the growing colony in a different light and

Comments

[miss_aztec57]

AHH SO BEAUTIFUL I CAN'T EVEN..... Every single chapter of this fic just took my breath away. This has to be one of the best Hetalia fics ever written in my opinion. Im finding it so hard to find the right words for it but, its wonderful and ever so perfect. I enjoyed every single moment of this fic and thank you for it. Im sad to see it end cause i was right there when it began but, it was a really fitting last chapter and so wonderful. I LOVE IT!!! but now its over! *sob* AND I LOVE YOU FOR WRITTING THIS WORK OF GENIUS MY DEAR. xDD

[masanami]

Oh man. Thank you so much. Your comment really means so much to me. Seriously. I'm so happy and glad that you enjoyed this fic. I had so much fun working on it and I'm really glad in my decision to share something so large with the communities out there and that people like you read and enjoyed it. Thank you for sticking around to the end, hun <333 ILU too!!

[madnesshp]

Favorite part:

“America…” he mumbled underneath his breath. “Were you always this beautiful?”

But he had known-he had always known-that America was this beautiful.

And for some reason he couldn’t quite fathom-despite everything he had lost-it made him smile.

Aww~~ man. Great things inevitably must come to an end. But the note the fic ends on is very promising, if not bittersweet. Did it hurt you to finish it? ♥ *hug* It was wonderful.

[masanami]

It hurts, but its a good hurt.

I'm just glad I was able to give it an ending that was hopefully uplifting especially after all the angst in sooo many chapters.

eeeek England, such a tsudere to the end. <3

Thanks love. Such a supportive waifu ♥

[refinnej357]

You have made me cry so many times by writing this story. The extent of history and the characters you cover whilst unfolding the delicate love-story between America and England is breathtaking, and like I said, I cried--a bit of a lot in fact. And now I'm so sad to see its inevitable end. This last chapter was possibly the best though. My heart was with England through out the entire fic, and I'm glad he was not left completely empty, that he had some closure and perhaps a small glimpse of a happier future. And America's frontier having begun, the New World unfolding before his eyes. Perfect. (Would it be too cheesy to say that that last bit with America made my heart sing? It was so passionately American, and that part especially made me want to cry, just pulled on heart strings because I'm vainly in love with my own country. Forgive me!) This was beautiful, and I love you for writing it! Thank you!

[masanami]

eeeeek ohmygosh thank you so much for such lovely words. I'm so happy you enjoyed this fic because it was so much fun for me to write and I really just wanted people to enjoy the ride with me. Doing all the research was tedious but fun. The angst was heavier than I had anticipated I'm sorry I made you cry!! but I hope the ending was uplifting and held the promise for a bright future...?

Again, thank you so much. You've made this writer's night.

[sppandaaa]

This entire fic was simply amazing. I loved reading it form beginning to end from when you posted the first chapter. Just. Argh. Too beautiful for words. I'm pretty sure this will always be on of my fav Hetalia fics ever~ <3

[masanami]

awww ♥ Thank you so much dear--for the lovely words and for sticking with this fic until the end. Your words really touch me and make this writer so very happy <333

[chiisana00]

-Tearing up- TT__TT

[masanami]

wahhh *hands over some tissue*