Fic: Sentire (6/9)

[roquentine]

Title: Sentire (6/9)
Author: Ella Jane
Characters: Nine/Rose, Jack
Chapter Rating: NC-17
Series Rating: NC-17
Timeline: AU from The Doctor Dances
A/N: Ahem. *commences sounding of alarm bells* Stay with me, though, I promise it'll be okay. :) I bow down before

Comments

[dark_aegis]

Whoa. Whoa that was unexpected. You were absolutely right that it's getting darker and I'm sure it's going to get even darker before it gets better. Especially with the Doctor's actions. I can't wait for the next installment!

[roquentine]

Holy cow, that was fast! I'm still tweaking the typos! :) As always, thanks for your comment... I'm glad to know people are sticking with it!

[wendymr]

Oh my god, what has he done to her? What has he done? And now he's just getting up and leaving, and he sounds like he's being incredibly callous, yet I can only guess - from what we've seen inside his mind - that he's broken and guilty and he doesn't dare be anywhere near her.

Oh, Doctor.

That was a gorgeous lovemaking scene, and that made this development all the more shocking as a result. Was he inside her head somehow? Did he push her too far? She's catatonic, isn't she? Oh, so many questions.

And this, this, is what's sticking with me:
Rose was young and energetic and silly and Jack was too, and therefore he provided a certain kind of outlet for her that the Doctor couldn't, and that was fine. She loved Jack, yes -- the Doctor did, too -- but however much she shared her body with him, there were parts of her that only the Doctor could reach. He knew that, without doubt. He knew it.

But the Doctor was broken. He had to keep checking, keep testing her. He hated himself for it, but he couldn't stop.

He couldn't get enough.Poor

[roquentine]

Oh, so many questions...

If it's any comfort at all, you are asking all the right questions, or at least the ones I'd hoped people would be thinking about as they read! Thank you for sharing your reactions!

[slvrcrystalc]

We're getting into the darkness you mentioned aren't we?

"You're the one she's going to reach for." It pained Jack a little to say it, but it was the truth, and so help him, if Rose wanted the Doctor when she woke up, then he would damn well make sure the Doctor was there.

"No. She knows I did this. She's going to want you." He turned toward the door.

I don't think that's true, but the Doctor is so shattered that it's what he thinks will be true. I think Rose waking up without the Doctor will MAKE it true. =(

Also, what did he do?!

And Rose, her eyes locked into the Doctor's, could feel each of them, and feel them sensing each other, in her body, through her body...
Was he linking with her telepathically, and showing her what he could feel, what Jack could feel?

...she heard nothing but a deafening silence and she was drowning. Sensory deprivation(from shock), or was it something the Doctor did?

I REALLY LOVE THIS FIC!

[roquentine]

Thank you so much, I am so pleased you are enjoying it! And I really appreciate being able to see what people are taking away from it, so thank you for your insightful comments!

[slvrcrystalc]

WMR usually says all the good, insightful things, and I really don't want to repeat what others have already said. =)

[roquentine]

No worries! Of course you can repeat if the same things jump out at you... it's so interesting to me to see what people pick up on, because it's usually exactly what I want them to pick up on! :)

[honorh]

Whoa. That was unexpected. What did he do, I wonder?

[roquentine]

What, indeed? *whistles, looks to the side*... ;) Thanks for the comment!

[dragonmom64]

Wow! Guess I'm just a little confused....so Rose got some intense, er, stimulation....and that sent her off the deep end? Or did the Doctor get in her head, as it were? Interested to see where this goes.....

[roquentine]

(See reply above)... thanks so much for reading, and commenting, and friending, yay!