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roseletters

[Pinstripes] Reborn

Jan 09, 2010 11:54

Title: Reborn
Story/Character: Pinstripes / Seth, Elijah
Rating: PG-13 (violence)
word count: 3,299

Written for the brigits_flame prompt of "starting over".

( It was raining in the city, a seemingly endless cold season of drizzling wet and flat gray skies behind a backdrop of square, ugly buildings that left nothing to the imagination in their angular shapes and exposed brickwork. )

fic:scene, story:pinstripes

Comments 19

osoreranai January 12 2010, 00:33:47 UTC

What makes this stand out to me isn't that it's well-done, but that I want to read more. I want to know more about them. I understand, there were limits on account of the contest, but that just makes it more impressive.

roseletters January 12 2010, 13:54:10 UTC

That's a wonderful comment. Thank you.