Comments | roses_in_may: FIC: Lessons, Mal/River, R

roses_in_may

FIC: Lessons, Mal/River, R

Oct 10, 2008 03:36

Title: Lessons
Author: frannie
Pairing: Mal/River
Rating: R
Summary: Inara suggests River goes to training school and Mal take it really well - or not.

( ‘You won’t be going with Inara to no training house. You will not be playing some high society prostitute!’ ‘But a low society whore, like the one you bedded down? That’s alright?’ )

fic, firefly, mal/river

Comments 8

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roses_in_may October 9 2008, 17:25:47 UTC

it's 4.30 in the morning here, so when I saw ur msg it took me by surprise. Its a big bad world, I guess. Lol.
Glad you like it. Its therapeutic, all this almost porn. Lol.

americanfairy October 9 2008, 18:21:54 UTC

I don't think that I can praise your writing enough. Everyone is so in character that I can see it in my minds eye with no effort. In my humble opinion I hope that you continue writing these as I enjoy reading them immensely.

gwenfrewi72 October 9 2008, 20:26:30 UTC

Oh, I loved this, especially how RIver explained that she had to be someone's and if it wasn't him, it would be someone else's. Jayne's possibly. Hmm, and boy did Mal had that. BWAHAHAHAHAHA!

More please.

pladbelle_87 October 10 2008, 01:08:21 UTC

Wow... =] it was wonderful, though I'm a rayne shipper, but this is really good. Lovely.

garnigal October 10 2008, 15:48:45 UTC

Wonderful. I love the back and forth manipulation/need aspects of this.