Fic: Of Dreams, Mal/River, R

[roses_in_may]

Title: Of Dreams
Author: frannie
Rating: R
Pairing: Mal/River, Mal/Inara (kind of but not really)
Summary: She thinks this girl-River may love Mal, but had forgotten that they are meant to love back.

Comments

[americanfairy]

Wow, so it was River he was thinking about all along?

Nice job! *thumbs up* The way that you portray River and Mal is amazing.

[roses_in_may]

thanks, i was worried about this one - but it was never going to be Mal/Inara - I just can't seem to ship them. lol.

[anonymous]

Wow... nice surprise ending!

[roses_in_may]

glad you liked it, and for commenting. ta. :)

[ravenseer]

*LAUGHS*

Yes. I can totally see that. Poor confused River. :-)

[roses_in_may]

thanks. :)

it made me laugh as well.

[ravenseer]

I've added this post to my memories, its lovely!

Do keep writing, I am enjoying these, and its providing me insight and food for thought for a character i roleplay who has a mindset similar to River's.

Thanks for posting! I'm never brave enough to show my fan fic to people...

[roses_in_may]

no, no, you should always share your fan fic with people - its meant to be shared, thats what makes this medium so interesting.

But yes, thank you for commenting, its nice to know someone reads them - the fandom is too quiet.

[leaute]

I'm actually a big Mal/Inara fan, and I typically don't enjoy a lot of Mal/River fiction just because I'm not too fond of the pairing. I did enjoy this one, though! Great work. I enjoyed your writing. ^^

[roses_in_may]

oooh, then I'm twice as glad that you liked it. Its very hard to read (or write) against your pairing. Thanks. :)

[raesstienway]

Nice! I like the whole of idea of this all happening in Mal's head/River's head its very in tune with her "living in her head" most of the time because of what happened to her - Anyway nice job!