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Agent Bartowski - part five

May 15, 2009 18:05

Title: Agent Bartowski
Author: Ru_salki99
Rating: PG (will go up)
Pairing: Chuck/Casey
Prompt: The Muse gave me - Chuck comes out to Morgan when Morgan sets him up with a girl
Disclaimer: Chuck belongs to NBC.
Summary: Sarah's gone and Morgan thinks Chuck needs to get laid. And Morgan... well, he's like a dog with a bone sometimes. While Casey - he ( Read more... )

chuck/casey, chuck, fanfic

Comments 25

ldycat1170 May 15 2009, 18:40:36 UTC

That was great. I love the build up and the drunken groping. More soon please.

ru_salki99 May 16 2009, 17:52:27 UTC

Thanks :D

mnol_heart May 15 2009, 18:51:19 UTC

yay! good chapter! loved them talking about devon ;)
can't wait for more!!

ru_salki99 May 16 2009, 17:51:15 UTC

hee hee. Well, Devon is hot :D

prlrocks May 15 2009, 20:35:20 UTC

This is my favorite chapter yet. The moments between Chuck/Casey were perfection and I loved the Ellie bits.

You know, I was actually think your writing has noticeably improved in the last month or so. Not that was bad to begin with... quite the opposite, but now it's even better. :)

ru_salki99 May 16 2009, 17:50:22 UTC

Wow. Thank you.

I think that it's just that I have had more time to spend on writing than I have had in the past. And I'm actually re-writing parts before posting them (which is a first for me). I'm also using a thesauraus ^___^

Seriously though. Thanks. I'm always trying to improve.

prlrocks May 16 2009, 18:55:54 UTC

That would explain it. Well, your increased efforts have not gone unnoticed. :D At least by me.

blcwriter May 15 2009, 21:01:31 UTC

You know, there are so many great things here besides Casey nuzzling Chuck's neck, but the one that sticks out is the "I will always be watching," bit. It's both protective, creepy, and interdependent. Chuck needs someone to watch and take care of him at this point in his life, but ... Casey needs someone to watch. He doesn't feel like Casey unless he can watch and take care of someone, and that interdependence goes beyond just a D/s sex vibe. The possibilities for Chuck giving Casey some emotional safe space could be part of that. Looking forward to more from you, as always.

ru_salki99 May 16 2009, 17:40:54 UTC

Glad you enjoyed the nuzzling and yeah, Casey will always be there, looking out for Chuck. Even more so now they're partners.

themaskedmckay May 15 2009, 21:19:00 UTC

Huzzah! I really like this story and how slow they're taking it.

ru_salki99 May 16 2009, 17:35:54 UTC

Taking it slow is very new for me... in fic land that is. So I'm glad it's working out.