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Fic: Reality (Shows) Bite

Feb 06, 2011 14:07

Title: Reality (Shows) Bite
Author: ruafair
Artist: wildcat92
Beta: fairfax_verde
Disclaimer: Real people, but this story is fiction, and written for fun.

( Part Four: )

adam_lambert, tommy_ratliff, lbb, rps, fic

Comments 63

lelouch7 February 11 2011, 06:22:05 UTC

this one is adorable
despite the grammatical errors, I really enjoy reading it
it's sweet, funny, and hot
thank you for sharing

ruafair February 11 2011, 15:39:18 UTC

Thank you!!! It was fun, well for the most part LOL, to write!

Fiona

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ruafair February 11 2011, 15:39:51 UTC

Thanks :))) Wasn't sure it would work at the start but it came together. Glad you like it.

Fiona

shadow505 February 11 2011, 07:10:36 UTC

Yea there were some grammatical errors, but I had a smile plastered on my face thru most of this. :) It was sweet, cute, hot, funny...all kinds of smiley things rolled into one.

ruafair February 11 2011, 15:40:29 UTC

Smiley things are good LOL Glad you liked it.

Will fix those errors over the weekend.

Fiona

vlredreign February 11 2011, 07:37:28 UTC

I want to take this story and wrap myself up in it and never let go.

And for the record...I HATE The Bachelor. lol

This was so gut-busting funny at times - oh, Brad, never change! And NEIL!! And Sutan and Terrance, and I loved Jason! Good throwing Mark in the mix, I always feel like those shows have a ringer. And it actually made sense for him to be there, doing what he did.

Adam and Tommy together...omg...the Ferris Wheel and the various closets and bathrooms, the club, meeting Mia and Chantala, damn that was funny! And Cabo and SEX and...yeah, that was good. Adam breaking Tommy's heart on national tv...I knew it was coming, but still, OUCH. I wanted to cry with him.

You do have some grammatical errors here, you might want to fix them after all the posting is done. It can distract at times, jsyk. But that aside, the story itself was great. I wanna read it again already!

ruafair February 11 2011, 15:41:54 UTC

I want to take this story and wrap myself up in it and never let go.

This made me smile :)

I'm so glad you liked it! I never watched the Bachelor, just read it's premise being used in other fandoms and thought it a cute idea!!!

Will fix those errors over the weekend!

Fiona

cassandra_ml February 11 2011, 12:05:48 UTC

I loved it, loved loved loved it.
really great story.

ruafair February 11 2011, 15:42:15 UTC

Thanks sweetie! Glad you loved it :)

Fiona