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So good! bimshire June 30 2010, 14:00:09 UTC
You really must not stop writing! This chapter was excellent! I find myself looking forward to reading whatever you write!You really have quite a way with words and the English language.

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Re: So good! ruari555 July 1 2010, 00:16:08 UTC
Fear not! I haven't!

Thank you for the extremely kind words.

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radak June 30 2010, 15:14:31 UTC
Amazing!

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ruari555 July 1 2010, 00:16:22 UTC
Thanks!

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Couldn't put it down iimzadi July 1 2010, 00:11:00 UTC
Brilliant ^_^ I didn't mean to read the whole story as I don't usually read tbc stories lol I just wanted to read a few lines see what it was about. I just couldn't stop reading, I loved it. I can't wait for the next bit well done :D

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Re: Couldn't put it down ruari555 July 1 2010, 00:20:01 UTC
Well, golly! I won't apologize for sucking you in (we writers are like that! ). Thank you for giving it a shot. I appreciate you letting me know you're enjoying it.

I'm making a concerted effort to get the next part up at a wee bit quicker rate. Though...beating 6 1/2 months shouldn't be too hard. :)

Thanks again for coming along for the ride!

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thefutilitarian July 1 2010, 00:52:00 UTC
The absolute favourite thing about this story is how infrequently you update. I know that sounds like a mad thing to say but honestly, when I saw this update, I re-read every other bit before I read this. And every time, I forget how fantastic this is and every time it's like getting to enjoy a brand new story.

I know everyone has already mentioned how sweet and different this is but it really is wonderful to see something so...180 degrees from how I see this couple and to be allowed to share and be part of your/their vision/world.

Needless to say, looking forward to the next update, whenever that may be!

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ruari555 July 1 2010, 02:52:29 UTC
Thanks tons! Just consider me a vacuum cleaner -- sucking in all the re-readers!

I know everyone has already mentioned how sweet and different this is but it really is wonderful to see something so...180 degrees from how I see this couple and to be allowed to share and be part of your/their vision/world.

I don't mind hearing it again. :)

Again, thanks for the wonderful feedback. I truly appreciate it.

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calliopedawn July 1 2010, 02:50:24 UTC
You are an amazing writer. The story itself is captivating but the way in which it's written is captivating. Amazing.

As for this chapter.

Soo... Uhmm. Okay.

Wow

you need to just put life on hold and write. Okay????

This is abso-freaking-loulty. BRILLIANT!!

If I say I'll give you cookies and whatever else your heart desires, will you write
faster???

:D
please?

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ruari555 July 1 2010, 02:55:41 UTC
Wow! Thanks! But the pups need to eat, so I can't stop working at my "real" job. :)

I'm aiming to best my time of 6 months between updates. Promise!

Again, thanks for the awesome review.

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