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hereforthefun July 1 2010, 04:29:54 UTC
I just discovered this & read the whole thing. I really love your writing style, you had me hooked immediately. This is so different from -- I was going to say most DWP fics, but actually everything! You totally capture the emotional adventure, the depth, of a growing friendship. Thanks for sharing & please keep writing!

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ruari555 July 2 2010, 00:31:39 UTC
Welcome to our little neighborhood! I'm very big into "different" so I appreciate you commenting. Your words are very kind.

Thank you!

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chilly_flame July 1 2010, 04:37:07 UTC
I finally caved and read this today, start to finish. It's truly marvelous--I can only hope you continue for as long as it takes to complete it. Intriguing, poetic and lovely.

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ruari555 July 2 2010, 00:45:45 UTC
Was there some unknown peer pressure? :)

Thanks for giving it a go. I know there is some concern that it won't get finished, but it's at a place now where I'm merely "separating" revelations. So the next part is nearly ready for post.

Thanks again for giving it a chance and letting me know what you think!

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perks123 July 1 2010, 11:58:24 UTC
An absolutely beautiful story.

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ruari555 July 2 2010, 00:46:07 UTC
Thank you very much!

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flyhiwithme2 July 1 2010, 22:56:30 UTC
Thank you for updating this story. It's lyrical and poetic. The relationship grows and I become more invested in these two souls. I hope there is more to share.

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ruari555 July 2 2010, 00:46:53 UTC
There is oceans more to share!! Thank you for sticking with it and commenting!

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