i'm squealing [i never thought i was capable of psychically squealing oh my god] & i'm sorry for the vague prompt i gave i was worried about it all the time and this.,. this.. THIS MASTERPIECE JUST OH MY GOD neruda approves, not to mentioned you incorporated art and architecture into this and it fused seamlessly.
Kyungsoo had been Sehun's first in all the ways that mattered. this was so heartwarming ;; /sehun sucks soo's cock/
i hope you don't mind me quoting SOME of my fave lines here:
"Is he good-looking?" he demands. "Please tell me he's hideous."
The day Sehun first hears Junmyeon's name, the sky he's painting is almost blue.
The sky Sehun is painting is almost blue.and then i like how there are parts where sehun internalized the situation and idk, he just appeared more vulnerable and relatable. his jealousy, feelings of inadequacy. oh and i noticed the subtle shifts in the scenes and i am in love with the way you show us the condition of the skies and how it almost, almost reflects their relationship; clear, hazy, etcs.
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you twisted motherf-cker. this is the nicest thing anyone's ever said to me~ 8)
i can't hate junmyeon either because who wouldn't want a piece of that ass. and and and! i wanted to slap kyungsoo too because WHY did he have to be so.. like.. that. I HAVE ONESHOTS PLANED FROM THEIR PERSPECTIVES cries because they need redeeming somewhat THEY HAD ACTUAL MOTIVATIONS AND STUFF I PROMISE
ahhh this was such a well-written piece >< honestly til the end i was still hoping kyungsoo and sehun worked out their differences so when the story ended i just stared at the screen going ??? because how did this end up with sekai and kyungmyeon
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((i'm still hoping sesoo ends up together or at least talk it out gdi how could it end without a proper closure noooo)) [muffled taylor swift plays in the distance] thEEEY ARE NEVER EVER EVERRRR GETTING BACK TOGETHER (sorry but i've been singing that ever since this got posted)
Everyone was so perfect, niches formed and built just for them in a way no one else could fit: still-growing Sehun and go-with-the-wind Jongin and Prince Charming Junmyeon and too-together-for-his-own-good Kyungsoo. Your pacing and your metaphor - you could feel the way they cracked like someone slowly tearing a sheet of paper (and not without a few nicks and cuts of their own).
I'm not surprised to read this was prompted by a Neruda poem (if I'm reading uberchrome's comment correctly). His words fill me with feelings on any day.
I laughed and I cried (when Kyungsoo left without even bothering to wake him, with just a note on the counter, I gave an actual cry of dismay) and I love this so wholly. I'm very grateful to uberchrome and to you for coming together (even just by chance) to make something so wonderful.
Everyone was so perfect, niches formed and built just for them in a way no one else could fit I am actually so so glad to hear this. My biggest fear is that the characters will come across as interchangeable generic blankfaces with names attached. ;w;
when i was about halfway through part 2, i thought to myself that i think this is going to end well. my prediction was wrong, but i'm kind of glad it was. even though his paranoia was really irrational, it was /him/ and it's a strike on kyungsoo's part for not acknowledging it, no matter how stupid it was.
i was kind of surprised that sehun actually left, and i suppose kyungsoo was too, since usually it's an empty threat. it was a bit sad that kyungsoo stopped trying that easily, the calls fading out to nothing. i loved the ending though, the way kyungsoo's faded out and jongin's become his anchor. (but i'm a hopeless a hopeless sekai shipper so welp)
It's true, and I deliberately wanted to make that threat valid for once? Thanks for noticing the stuff and- *ceases to be coherent and just flails silently*
Im gonna try this new thing where I write my comments as I type so I don't always forget what I wanted to say HAHA
He'd worked with oils while he was back in school, of course, oil being the traditional medium for painting, but he'd decided soon after that acrylic worked best for his own purposes and had proceeded to abandon oils as soon as they were no longer required. The result being that now he's sadly out of practice and struggling to remember the minute rules. My life in two sentences.
Omg sehun being a baby about onions PLEASE
Can I point out that eating creamcheese while painting is A VERY DANGEROUS TASK
Omg ive never seen the word ‘snerk’ before
“oh im just gonna sleep over at your rivals house” MAYBE KYUNGSOO IS THE DICK, NOT SUHO
gotten along like a house on fireomg best similie
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[ ROLLS around in glitter and i'll come back when i'm done reading ;; ]
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Kyungsoo had been Sehun's first in all the ways that mattered. this was so heartwarming ;; /sehun sucks soo's cock/
i hope you don't mind me quoting SOME of my fave lines here:
"Is he good-looking?" he demands. "Please tell me he's hideous."
The day Sehun first hears Junmyeon's name, the sky he's painting is almost blue.
The sky Sehun is painting is almost blue.and then i like how there are parts where sehun internalized the situation and idk, he just appeared more vulnerable and relatable. his jealousy, feelings of inadequacy. oh and i noticed the subtle shifts in the scenes and i am in love with the way you show us the condition of the skies and how it almost, almost reflects their relationship; clear, hazy, etcs. ( ... )
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this is the nicest thing anyone's ever said to me~ 8)
i can't hate junmyeon either because who wouldn't want a piece of that ass. and and and! i wanted to slap kyungsoo too because WHY did he have to be so.. like.. that.
I HAVE ONESHOTS PLANED FROM THEIR PERSPECTIVES cries because they need redeeming somewhat THEY HAD ACTUAL MOTIVATIONS AND STUFF I PROMISE
i love you be my chingu.
of course bb~ <3
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[muffled taylor swift plays in the distance] thEEEY ARE NEVER EVER EVERRRR GETTING BACK TOGETHER
(sorry but i've been singing that ever since this got posted)
I'm wailing I'm so glad you liked it ;w;
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Everyone was so perfect, niches formed and built just for them in a way no one else could fit: still-growing Sehun and go-with-the-wind Jongin and Prince Charming Junmyeon and too-together-for-his-own-good Kyungsoo. Your pacing and your metaphor - you could feel the way they cracked like someone slowly tearing a sheet of paper (and not without a few nicks and cuts of their own).
I'm not surprised to read this was prompted by a Neruda poem (if I'm reading uberchrome's comment correctly). His words fill me with feelings on any day.
I laughed and I cried (when Kyungsoo left without even bothering to wake him, with just a note on the counter, I gave an actual cry of dismay) and I love this so wholly. I'm very grateful to uberchrome and to you for coming together (even just by chance) to make something so wonderful.
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I am actually so so glad to hear this. My biggest fear is that the characters will come across as interchangeable generic blankfaces with names attached. ;w;
I'm really glad you liked it! ^^
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i was kind of surprised that sehun actually left, and i suppose kyungsoo was too, since usually it's an empty threat. it was a bit sad that kyungsoo stopped trying that easily, the calls fading out to nothing. i loved the ending though, the way kyungsoo's faded out and jongin's become his anchor. (but i'm a hopeless a hopeless sekai shipper so welp)
anyways, this was excellent!!!
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He'd worked with oils while he was back in school, of course, oil being the traditional medium for painting, but he'd decided soon after that acrylic worked best for his own purposes and had proceeded to abandon oils as soon as they were no longer required. The result being that now he's sadly out of practice and struggling to remember the minute rules.
My life in two sentences.
Omg sehun being a baby about onions PLEASE
Can I point out that eating creamcheese while painting is A VERY DANGEROUS TASK
Omg ive never seen the word ‘snerk’ before
“oh im just gonna sleep over at your rivals house” MAYBE KYUNGSOO IS THE DICK, NOT SUHO
gotten along like a house on fireomg best similie ( ... )
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Oh, I'm so, so sorry. 8|
Please don't hate Kyungsoo! He and Junmyeon didn't behave very well (especially Junmyeon), but they're not all bad! ;; Haha
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