i keep runnin' runnin' runnin' for horrours

[feixing]

Title: i keep runnin' runnin' runnin'
For: horrours
Pairing: Lu Han/Xiumin
Rating: PG-13
Length: ~8,600 words
Summary, potential warnings: Going to boarding school in America, Lu Han just wants to forget he's the (adopted!) son of a duke and focus on two things: soccer, and Minseok. That doesn't really work out.

Comments

[yoongi]

I DON'T THINK YOU UNDERSTAND HOW MUCH I LIKE THIS

"They're a bit wobbly, and Lu Han can see where they cheated a little on one of the corners, but the lines are bright and it cheers him up to see them restored to their standard whiteness." swooning at your amount of detail, please teach a class on How to Details, please and thank you

"...the kick of his heart whenever he sees Minseok laugh victoriously at slipping past Lu Han's guard to score a goal." i swear to god, i made the strangest noise here. i feel like my heart was the one being kicked, not lu han's. also crying a little at how subtle this was. sometimes you really don't need skywriting or a circus tent of words to get through to your reader when someone has Feelings

"Lu Han is strong and tall and independent, too, but not in an effortless way like Minseok is." painful, you are. look, you've turned me into yoda. i don't even know how that happened.

"...he sits next to Minseok and Minseok lets him curl up with Lu Han's head on Minseok's shoulder and Lu Han thinks

[seulpeo]

THIS IS SUCH A NICE COMMENT Q__________Q
thank you thank you for reading and commenting :D :D :D!

[hipployta]

Chanyeol always winning Kris over...LOL

Luhan...Minseok is right...that is not how you confess LOL

[seulpeo]

chanyeol is an irresistible force of nature!!! and i think lu hans confession had a bit of his own charm n____n

[ryutakay]

loved it!
high school/university aus are always a favorite. mix that with royalcy stuff and bam, awesome plot hahahhaha
i had lots of fun reading it! thanks for writing this story!

[seulpeo]

thank you for reading!!!
i love school aus :'( im glad you liked my fic~

[cactuzoz]

this is perfect and all my xiuhan feels

[seulpeo]

YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW MUCH SOCCER!XIUHAN DATA I CONSUMED WHILE WRITING THIS FIC :'(
thank you for reading!!! im glad you liked it~*~*~

[rubyls]

i really, really enjoyed this!!!! especially the characterization and pairing dynamics; how xiuhan were with each other - i thought that was lovely. lu han was perfect, how he found it difficult to say anything to minseok about minseok, but dragging him back to england and then giving him the chance again just makes the words spill out of his mouth, that was really nice ;~~~~~; also i'm not sure what it is about your tone/style - it's very mellow? quiet? lax? - but it works so well with xiuhan and i really enjoyed this :3333

[seulpeo]

im glad you liked the xiuhan!!! and thank you for the compliment about my writing itself sobs :'(