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Drifting

Jun 28, 2005 15:46

Title: Drifting
Author: jazzyjello
Disclaimer: None of this belongs to me. I'm not making a profit.
Challenge: First kiss.
Summary: Luna had always paid attention to Ron. She doesn't know what to do when he starts looking back.
Rating: PG
Author Notes: Thanks to grimmy23 for the speedy beta.
Warnings: Fluff, fluff and more FLUFF.

( Drifting )

Comments 52

silverjedi June 28 2005, 21:19:49 UTC

That was great! Poor Luna! Being teased like that. :( I would have liked it if Ron had punched Michael. Grrr no one says bad things about Luna with Ron around!

jazzyjello June 29 2005, 16:16:55 UTC

Thank you!

Yeah, poor Luna. :(

annearchy June 28 2005, 21:35:39 UTC

That was really lovely, really well done. You carried a couple of themes through the story nicely from beginning to end. The kiss itself was very sweet. R/L fluff totally rocks:) Thank you for sharing.

jazzyjello June 29 2005, 16:17:31 UTC

Thank you! Glad you liked it.

atlanta06 June 28 2005, 23:53:23 UTC

*cries* It's s-so beatiful! *sniffle*

*wipes eyes* Now this is why I <3 this pairing. Best writing...

jazzyjello June 29 2005, 16:17:49 UTC

*hands you a tissue*

Thank you!

sillyriddles June 29 2005, 03:12:54 UTC

Awwww, that was sooooo sweet...Luna kinda reminds me of early BMW Topanga, I realize. I love your story, jazzy!

jazzyjello June 29 2005, 16:18:45 UTC

Hee. Thanks, Silly!

Topanga, really? She reminds me more of Hermione...maybe that's just the hair. :)

girls_are_weird June 29 2005, 03:17:23 UTC

awwwww, this fic is the sweetest thing! i think luna's characterisation was just spot on. it was awesome ^^

jazzyjello June 29 2005, 16:19:13 UTC

Thank you! Glad I got the characterization right.