Fic: Outside the Window

Jan 16, 2013 01:35


Title: Outside the Window
Pairing: Ben/Leslie with a generous helping of Ann friendship times
Word Count: 8200
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Birthday fic! 
Author’s Note: Extra special thanks to shornt for beta reading this.  I greatly appreciate it!
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shornt January 16 2013, 13:06:29 UTC
Ahhh the scene you added to the end is perfect, it's exactly what this needed :) I still love this so much, especially the morning intimacy parts because I'M PREDICTABLE. But I love it and love your writing always. And I love this.

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ryeloza January 17 2013, 17:49:10 UTC
Thank you! (And thank you again times ten for beta-ing this for me.) :)

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bowlsohard January 16 2013, 13:41:07 UTC
You're great, and umm, you have great ideas. And, yeah.

I love the Ann/Ben friend times. And the whole premise is very romantic. I very much enjoyed this, as I enjoy all of your writings.

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ryeloza January 17 2013, 17:44:16 UTC
Thanks! :)

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c00kie January 16 2013, 14:23:59 UTC
This is quite lovely, a great read to start the day. I love the way you write the quiet intimacy and devotion between Ben and Leslie, and the friendship between Ben and Ann. Excellent job as always.

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ryeloza January 17 2013, 17:43:52 UTC
Thanks!

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ryeloza January 17 2013, 17:43:42 UTC
Aw, thank you so much!! You always give me the loveliest compliments--I so appreciate that. :)

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angelica_rules January 16 2013, 14:59:48 UTC
argh, i didn't and did need this so early in the morning! this is adorable! my birthday is in november so i also had only 1 birthday in my 26 years that it was sunny so i can totally understand how leslie feels about it! amazing job, i absolutely love your stories!!

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ryeloza January 17 2013, 17:41:39 UTC
Thank you! Mine is in January, so I can relate as well (although I don't remember minding the weather that much as a kid, tbh).

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