Comments | ryeloza: Fic: Out of Sight (2/2)

ryeloza

Fic: Out of Sight (2/2)

Mar 21, 2013 01:07

Title: Out of Sight (2/2)
Pairing: Ben/Leslie
Word Count: 3900
Rating: R
Setting: During Road Trip
Summary: AU version of Road Trip where Leslie and Ben decide to play Boggle with Chris.
A/n: How have I written this many fics where Leslie and Ben play games together? It's a mystery. I can promise that part two features no board games, though. ( Read more... )

parks and rec fic

Comments 35

c00kie March 21 2013, 05:38:31 UTC

Ben, your life is tragic. This put a smile on my face. Great job.

ryeloza March 22 2013, 19:29:12 UTC

Thanks! I did torture him a bit in this fic, I guess.

ashisfriendly March 21 2013, 06:05:21 UTC

Agree with c00kie up there. Tragic.

I can't get over your tension, like are you serious. NAKED IN A SHOWER WITH CLOTHED WET LESLIE. WHAT HIS HAPPENING.

This was way better than I could have anticipated. You are a goddess.

ryeloza March 22 2013, 19:32:01 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad it didn't feel too over the top. :)

shornt March 21 2013, 11:05:09 UTC

Oh god. I kind of love that you didn't go for the obvious here, and it was funny and also really sweet and also KISSING!!!!!! Oh man. I really like how you chose to do this, because I wasn't expecting it! AND MAN BEN'S LIFE IS A SERIES OF UNFORTUNATE EVENTS. Naked with Leslie in a shower and he can't do anything?? Goodness.

ryeloza March 22 2013, 19:33:42 UTC

Thanks! There have been so many amazing Road Trip AUs, I wanted to put them in a tense situation that was a little different. I'm glad it wasn't too beyond the realm of believability.

porcupine_jones March 21 2013, 12:53:57 UTC

I've been meaning to tell you for ages that I love everything you write, and then you wrote that shower scene and now I'm dead. Thank you, this was beautifully frustrating.

ryeloza March 22 2013, 19:34:02 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it!

spunkyar March 21 2013, 13:31:04 UTC

You know when you are reading a fic and you know your scroll bar is almost too the bottom and you just wish it would go on forever and never end...that is how I felt while reading this. It was better than I could have imagined. I loved how sweet and romantic and desperate their encounters were. Also the scene in the bathtub was perfect. Great job! :)

edeainfj March 21 2013, 17:51:28 UTC

Ditto with the scroll bar. *sigh*

ryeloza March 22 2013, 19:46:43 UTC

Thank you! I've had scroll bar anxiety with so many fics, it's crazy flattering to hear that about one of my fics. I'm glad you enjoyed it!