Title: You Can Come Back Now
Pairing: Ueda/Guess
Rating: PG
Genre: General
Summary: The garden of the heart he sang about in Ai no Hana turned out to be more real and more important than anyone could have thought.
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Lying on the grass, staring up at the sky... )
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or maybe not. D:
Anyways, I like this! ♥ it's so preetttty. :DDDDD I enjoyed the different perspectives~
djasdklsajdaskl. Nothing I say can justify how I feel . ♥
Just one line threw me off :
gotten his hair died and cut,
Sounds like he killed his hair and cut it. :/ Other than that, its lovely! :D
Good work as always, Ryunuka-chan-senpai!
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Really happy you like it ^_^
Yeah, that line, I was using my brother's laptop and some of the keys stick, inc luding the y, so the 'y' in 'dyed' didn't work and it must have auto-corrected it to 'died', I should probably fix that at some point :P
Anyway, thanks for reading and commenting~!
-gives you cooikies-
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I love this so much!!
Thanks for sharing.. :D
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Thanks for reading and commenting~!
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This was great! You already know that I got creeped out by the garden at first and then started to think too much about head places but then I got back into the story lol I can imagine a load of Tatsuya's chatting in a garden...for some reason that image fits quite well XD
I'm glad that he went back to Ryo and I'm glad that it was Ryo! It was cute! Good job missy!
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Ok, so multiple Ueda Tatsuya's at once would be a little weird :P
Thank you lots~!
-huggles and gives cookies- ^_^
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I love it. Actually, I love all your writing. :D
Thank you~
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Thanks for reading and commenting~!
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*can't find other words*
thank you for sharing~
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Thanks for reading and commenting~!
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