Oneshot - You Can Come Back Now

May 01, 2009 10:38


Title: You Can Come Back Now
Pairing: Ueda/Guess
Rating: PG
Genre: General
Summary: The garden of the heart he sang about in Ai no Hana turned out to be more real and more important than anyone could have thought.

Lying on the grass, staring up at the sky... )

genre: general, pairing: ryoda, oneshot

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sono_kiseki May 1 2009, 10:15:50 UTC
I THINK IM FIRST. :D
or maybe not. D:

Anyways, I like this! ♥ it's so preetttty. :DDDDD I enjoyed the different perspectives~

djasdklsajdaskl. Nothing I say can justify how I feel . ♥

Just one line threw me off :
gotten his hair died and cut,

Sounds like he killed his hair and cut it. :/ Other than that, its lovely! :D

Good work as always, Ryunuka-chan-senpai!

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ryunuka May 1 2009, 10:48:41 UTC
Yeah, you're first :P
Really happy you like it ^_^
Yeah, that line, I was using my brother's laptop and some of the keys stick, inc luding the y, so the 'y' in 'dyed' didn't work and it must have auto-corrected it to 'died', I should probably fix that at some point :P
Anyway, thanks for reading and commenting~!
-gives you cooikies-

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dayenniez May 1 2009, 10:39:07 UTC
OUchhh! what a great beautiful story you have here..
I love this so much!!

Thanks for sharing.. :D

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ryunuka May 1 2009, 10:46:31 UTC
Glad you like ^_^
Thanks for reading and commenting~!

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redturtleotaku May 1 2009, 10:54:19 UTC
Kyaaaaaa!
This was great! You already know that I got creeped out by the garden at first and then started to think too much about head places but then I got back into the story lol I can imagine a load of Tatsuya's chatting in a garden...for some reason that image fits quite well XD
I'm glad that he went back to Ryo and I'm glad that it was Ryo! It was cute! Good job missy!

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ryunuka May 1 2009, 11:27:00 UTC
Yay~! I'm really glad you liked it ^_^
Ok, so multiple Ueda Tatsuya's at once would be a little weird :P
Thank you lots~!
-huggles and gives cookies- ^_^

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yamapi_konkon May 1 2009, 13:17:17 UTC
So sweet! :)

I love it. Actually, I love all your writing. :D

Thank you~

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ryunuka May 1 2009, 13:41:36 UTC
Yay~ Glad you liked it ^_^
Thanks for reading and commenting~!

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raixas May 1 2009, 13:28:24 UTC
thats brilliantly beautiful...
*can't find other words*

thank you for sharing~

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ryunuka May 1 2009, 13:42:30 UTC
lol those words are good enough for me :P
Thanks for reading and commenting~!

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