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Jul 10, 2006 01:53

Title:Back To Start
Author: s0methingwick3d
Pairing:Jepha/Frank
Rating:PG-13-R
POV:Jepha's. first person
Summary: We were playing a game...
Disclaimer: I don't own anything except a computer and too many cds.
Author Note: Should I make this into a chaptered fic?

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normalhumanbein July 19 2006, 19:59:42 UTC
So, okay, I'm not usually the sort of person who hurls comments at writers screaming "Fix it! FIX IT!!!" butbutbut it's Jeph and it's Frank but it's not, and I think your description of grief may have broken my 'coherent feedback' button for life.

So yes, I may like this a little too much.

It would probably work as a chaptered fic, but to be honest I prefer it as a standalone. I like not knowing what happened to Frank, I like not knowing every little detail of Jeph's grieving process. It makes the parts that are there much more powerful.

Now if you'll excuse me, I have some serious curling and crying to do.

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s0methingwick3d July 20 2006, 00:24:45 UTC
yee!, thankyou.

yeah, i had extra instalments of this lying around in a notebook, but i decided not to post it.

oh no!!**comforts** **hands tea in the flavor of your choice** **huggles**

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