Teenage kicks (or just a teenage circus?) part 2/?

[s11235]

A/N: This comes to you totally unbeta'd but otherwise this post wouldn't have come until well after christmas- so you have to put up with my grammar and 'imaginative' take on the english language I'm afraid :P.
 Part 1 here: http://s11235.livejournal.com/14838.html

‘She’s not coming,’ Arthur says for the eighth time since we’d arrived as he drummed

Comments

[berlyyy]

Being a fan of the tv show inbetweeners, I absolutely love this story! I can see Arthur as Simon, Merlin as Will, Will as Neil and Gwaine as Jay :) and I love the fact that you've made Gwen sort of like the Carli equivalent, but not as mean, leading Simon on!
Thank you very much for this lovely story and have a merry christmas and a brilliant new year! :)

[s11235]

Glad you worked out the parallel characters- I thought I might have been the only one to know what on earth I was going on about :P
I have been really surprised by the number of Merlin AND Inbetweeners fans, I thought I was pretty much alone until I wrote this fic :D
Thanks very much for commenting, have a great christmas and a fab new year too :D!

[njcol]

Nice one, caught up with these 2 chapters and you really made me have a few good titters, you have a good sense of humor and have the characters off to a Tee.
Look forward to reading your next update Regards & HAPPY CHRISTMAS TO YOU!!!

[s11235]

Thanks very much, glad you enjoyed it and very glad you found it funny- I have a rather quirky sense of humour so very glad you 'got' it :D
Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year! :D

[rainbow_connec]

I love these kids and how wonderfully awkward they are. ;D

[s11235]

Haha. I defintely take inspiration from my guy friends from school- adorable in a totally socially inept kinda way :P

[uhurafan]

Poor Arthur just can't seem to get it right...I really would love to know what is going on in Will's head!!

[s11235]

lol. And what goes in Will's head is a mystery- even to me :P

[saurina]

Ohh this is just getting better and better bb. I like the premise of Arthur being the outcast and Gwen the popular one. I also like the way Merlin seems to get along with everyone. And Will sweet dear Will, sorry mate but not even Neil are as daft as you, but I do love ya' always LOL!

I can't wait to read more, I love your characterization it's spot on without losing the feeling of being in the Inbetweener-universe *\0/*

[s11235]

Thanks very much. Yeah, I thought I would twist the normal premise- glad you liked it. And will is the daftest creature to walk the fictional planet- the combo of neil and sir william was always going to be a bizarre combo :P
And thanks very much, I'm glad you feel I haven't lost the characters in there- that's been the hardest thing about this particular AU.
Thanks for the feedback. As always, it is very much appreciated :D