Fic: Come Undone | DCU | Jason/Tim | NC-17 (this part) | 3/3

[saavikam77]

Title: Come Undone - Part 3
Fandom: DCU
Pairing: Jason/Tim
Rating: NC-17 - this part
Word Count: 725
Prompt: For dcu_freeforall: release; for 50_darkfics: eruption
Summary: There's relief at the end of a long patrol, finally.
Disclaimer: DC and WB still own it all. I still own nothing. Darnit.
Author's Notes: Sorry this took so long!

Part 1 ~ Part 2

Comments

ICON!

[stinglikeabee]

'You guys did what in the shower?' XD

I am loving this. The first three chapters unfolded like a porn movie; I kept hearing the bow-chika-wow-wow when Jason finally made his move. And I had to giggle at Tim mentally making the transition from brothers to partners. That's the spirit!

My favourite part would have to be Tim foreseeing their activities after the shower, which included going upstairs for Alfred's cookies. It's this detail that makes my fangirl heart really happy. Yes, these are heroic characters who fight the neverending battle against the criminal elements of Gotham city. But they are also boys, and I don't ever want a time when they should no longer want Alfred's cookies.

Re: ICON!

[saavikam77]

Yeah, I think Dick already knows, and has probably shared his amusement with Babs. ^_~ Tim will be mortified! XD

I haven't specifically planned anymore for after this, but I'm not discounting it either. Tim's freak out and further rationalization could be fun! :p

I'm glad you liked the bit at the end. I felt like it was important to point out that, even with this happening, even with Jason wearing the cowl and Bruce gone, they are still very much Alfred's boys. :) It's a nice contrast, I think.

Thanks so much for the great comments, hon! :D

[mithen]

And Tim will save his now impending freak-out for morning, as planned.

Awww, Tim putting of a freak-out is a great sacrifice for him! :) I really liked the interplay between them a lot, the unabashed need and comradeship of it. Really nice.

[saavikam77]

Tim's definitely putting a lot of extra effort into just going with the flow. :p

Thanks so much, hon! :D