Comments | sabine1392: Nunkest Bibendum

sabine1392

Nunkest Bibendum

Jun 09, 2008 21:54

Pairing: Jack/10
Challenge: Intoxication
Rating: PG
Warning: THIS IS WATERED DOWN CRACK. SERIOUSLY. kissing, Donna's dirty mind, and getting smashed. oh, and some language. :O
Spoilers : none, really.
Summary: They went to a planet sized club/bar. But they forgot to bring someone along.

( Where to, first mate Noble? )

ianto, torchwood, doctor who, jack/ten, jack, donna, tw_dw_slashfest, ten, fic

Comments 23

fanbot June 13 2008, 02:42:14 UTC

So, where's the rest? No one is passed out and naked yet!

sabine1392 June 13 2008, 13:31:00 UTC

ohhh! someone's feisty!

my pr0n writing skills are not exactly up to par, but I'll see what I can do. customer service ftw!!

fanbot June 13 2008, 13:44:25 UTC

Sorry. Don't mean to sound feisty. I'll translate:
This is fun! Will you write more? Please?

sabine1392 June 13 2008, 13:46:35 UTC

no, i was teasing you. no offense meant!

ooh, def! i will put that on my list of things to write! thank you for the compliment!

madeelly June 13 2008, 03:39:42 UTC

Haha, awesome! Nunc est bibendum... "Now is drinking" is the literal translation.

Donna was perfect. Very Donna. The Doctor was awesome too, and he's so fun when he's drunk. And I love Donna's reaction to meeting Jack.

My only critcism is your grammar. "Hey," he said. Not "Hey." He said.

Sorry, but that's like, the one thing that makes me want to strangle people (not you, but...other people).

Anyways, awesome! At least you're getting some writing done. Good writing, too. I'm...not.

sabine1392 June 13 2008, 13:34:46 UTC

Sorry! Ms. Hamster (my english teacher) made me afraid to use commas, so now my love of commas has wilted like a scared man's cock. :(

wow. i still hold that idea up there with my better ones. We should definitely be dominatrixess (dominatrixi? dominatrixis?) for ONE DAY. omfg!

too early. :(

thank you!!

sabine1392 June 13 2008, 13:44:25 UTC

wait, where's the error? I canna find it!

obeythepenguin June 13 2008, 14:17:54 UTC

*laughs like a crazy person*

Brilliant. You write all the characters so well! Your Donna was perfect, and I'm sure if the Doctor ever got drunk, that's just how he'd be.

sabine1392 June 13 2008, 14:28:53 UTC

aww.. thank you! i like to think that the doctor would just get sillier when he was drunk. :)

anotherxworld August 20 2008, 09:58:34 UTC

'Now is drink'.

I second that motion, chin chin!

This was fantastic. Seriously fantastic. I love the way it's all short and choppy and just plain fun.

sabine1392 August 25 2008, 02:47:53 UTC

aww... thank you! i'm glad you enjoyed it. :)