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sabine1392

A Sprinkle in Time (1/?)

Oct 01, 2008 01:18

Title: A Sprinkle in Time (1/?)
’Verse: Doctor Who
Characters/Pairing: Jack, Doctor (10)
Rating: PG to start out with
Summary: There's always a price. Jack has paid his piper.
Length:
For: 64damn_prompts
Prompt: 2 a.m.

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For a man who had all the time in the world, Captain Jack Harkness didn’t do very much relaxing. )

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Comments 6

madeelly October 2 2008, 22:47:29 UTC

Damn you! I have work to do and YOU'RE DISTRACTING MEEEEE!

Loved it, by the way. More? Plz k thnx bai.

sabine1392 October 3 2008, 01:22:10 UTC

YOU SHALL NEVER BE PRODUCTIVE!! I CURSE YOU TO BE LIKE MEEEEEEEE!!!!

thank youz!!!

madeelly October 3 2008, 01:53:14 UTC

I misseth you.

sabine1392 October 3 2008, 02:34:09 UTC

awwwwws..... likewise!!!

sacred_men December 7 2008, 03:28:21 UTC

Hi. Found your journal via 64damn_prompts.

Heading downstairs he stopped in front of the ship, reveling in the feel of her intelligent aura. She purred when he reached out and stroked her side, causing him to chuckle in surprise. He wasn’t sure she’d recognize him.

These lines were my favorite because you clearly captured Jack's "voice" by having him chuckle..I could so see it; and the fact that you recognize the Tardis as a key character was fantastic. Nicely done. =)

sabine1392 December 10 2008, 02:18:46 UTC

THANK YOU!!