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saerashi

In My Time Of Dying 2

Aug 24, 2009 21:22

Title: In My Time Of Dying
Pairings: Yunjae,
Rating: PG-13 (for boy to boy pairing)
Genre: Angst
Length; Two-shot
Summary: They say that before someone dies, their life flashes before their eyes.
A/n:based on the song by Three Days Grace

part one

this is the second part

( part two )

yunjae, in my time of dying

Comments 25

twnklsnowflake August 24 2009, 14:18:34 UTC

I just realized I switched the roles between jae and yun -smacks self-
Jaejoong's words were beautiful, I'm on the verge of tears
I'm so happy Yunho lives:) this was wonderful
memories^^

saerashi August 25 2009, 10:30:26 UTC

hello... haha don't smack yourself dear, i did make it quite confusing. if you squint you might have found that it was yunho because of the little sister... ouh *hands you a tissue* and yeah, i won;t let my yunho die and i like happy endings... thank you for reading my fic!

crysclear August 24 2009, 14:20:22 UTC

wow..

really love the story as it goes.

want to see what happen next.

saerashi August 25 2009, 10:31:26 UTC

hello... thank you for loving my fic and sad to say i want to leave the ending like that... it's a two shot. maybe i might come up with other good fics that you might like. thanks again for reading!

redrose_1706 August 24 2009, 15:43:03 UTC

lol...
i see, its yunnie...
i really thought that it's jae
i almost *cough* cried while reading it ^^

saerashi August 25 2009, 10:38:37 UTC

hello... it's okay if you got the wrong person. i purposely made it confusing for people. *hands you a tissue* it's okay dear, yunjae lives. hehe... thanks for reading my fic!

nh0x_0okie August 24 2009, 16:03:23 UTC

Oh. So it's Yunnie. I though it is JaeJoongie. My bad >_<

Yay! So Yunnie does live. I love Jaejoongie's words <3. They're full of love.

I'm waiting for your new stories <33 and a sequel of this fic?

saerashi August 25 2009, 10:33:37 UTC

hello.. hehe.. i deliberately made people confuse in the first chapter just to see if it was effective and yeah... it proved to be. hehe... and i like happy endings so yunjae has to live. thank you so much for reading this fic and i hope i can come up with better fics in the future. thank you for the motivation. i will try my best. thanks again!

evangeluv August 24 2009, 16:06:52 UTC

Gaaaa~ Yunho wakes up at last!
Glad its a happy-ending!! =)

saerashi August 25 2009, 10:34:18 UTC

hello... yes, i like a happy ending so i must say that i did that to satisfy myself and also the readers. hehe... thanks for reading!