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sagent009a

works in progress

Feb 21, 2006 08:13

~Late Night Writings ( Read more... )

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thejrydproject February 22 2006, 00:28:46 UTC

those were enjoyable. i liked them.

sagent009a February 23 2006, 04:30:44 UTC

many thanks...any suggestions?? i like constructive criticism.

thejrydproject February 23 2006, 04:32:43 UTC

ive never be good at suggestions or criticism unless it is something i know all about. and poetry and writing have never been my strong points.

ummm suggestion 1 matt_bear February 23 2006, 18:24:20 UTC

keep it sexy at all costs........... and ummm put candy in the poem

Thread 5

ITS THE FIRST DAY OF SPRING! anonymous March 20 2006, 23:09:36 UTC

I can feel it,
does it really matter what its like?
If its real than its like…
Kind of like a kite with a hole for the light
To have a feeling of its own and try to take flight…