[PG13] Confessions From a Broken Heart

[sahbel]

Title: Confessions from a Broken Heart
Chapter: alternate ending
Author: sahbeL
Rating: PG13
Disclaimer: I do not own these boys. <3
Characters/Pairings: JaeHo/YooSu
Summary: “JaeJoong-Hyung! IF you had to choose between your own life and the success of Dong Bang Shin Ki, which would it be?”
Author's Notes: Here it is. :)

NOTE: The music cue

Comments

[crystaldee]

Oooh!!!
Imma stick till the end to smack YunHo on the face thousands of times!!!!
He HURT Jae!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
NOOOOOOO...Jae just got up from his coma, then he already received a bad bad baddddd news...
If I was Jae, Imma gonna be sleeping again...

Oooh..you gotta insert someone in here!
For JaeJoongie to get revenge for YunHo's betrayal... XDDDDDDD

I LOVE IT!!!
But... T___T *pats and hugs JaeJoongie...*
Waiting for the next part!!! ^_____^

PS: Btw, would you upload the .doc version for this fic? ^___^

[sahbel]

lol. can't spoil much about the sequel but it's definitely coming soon! :) just trying to decide whether to f-lock it due to adult themes. =D

thank you so much for sticking around and reviewing!! see you in the sequel and hopefully it doesn't disappoint :)

saranghae! <3

umm, .doc version of the fic im not so sure because the chapters are EVERYWHERE...o__O i've switched comps like.. a million times. you might be better off copying and pasting it from here using the links in the FICLIST? but i'll see what I can do. :)

[sahbel]

ngaw! thank you for sticking around! *sends the five over for group hugs* the sequel is coming soon, continued on from this ending so stay tuned! i'm just trying to decide whether i should f-lock it for adult themes.. which i prolly should do. lol.

can't say much about the sequel except i think it'll make you cry more. i know i cried buckets writing it. hahaha.. and i still haven't finished it too! >.< LOL.

thank you for the reviews and love! <3

[reveriepooh]

my heart broke.....same as Jaejae....
how could his heart take it??? crueal fate....
and Yunho?? *smack his head. If it's true love, one year is not long enough to break the spell......
T_____T

[sahbel]

i wanna post the sequel asap because so many readers are freaking out that yunjae are separated now. LOL. i can't wait to see what you all think with the sequel. but that's enough babble from me, i don't want to spoil anything =X

i just have to decide whether to f-lock it or not due to adult themes, then im good to go :) stay tuned, ne??

gamsahamnida for all the reviews and love!! see you in the sequel! xoxxx

[kpopangel]

omg i still can't believe i was so right when i said this alternate ending would be devastating.. sigh.. yunho-yah yunho-yah.. you already knew how big joongie's love is for you and just after one year of his coma state (i know one year is quite a long time but still..) you're now together with.. a girl... if i were joongie, i'd wish that i was asleep forever rather than waking up to this nightmare... poor him...

so in this version, his comeback concert and the bracelets thingy was merely a dream? then i wonder, when you write a sequel later on, will it be based on this version or the other one? you will continue from this one, right? cos seeing from the happy ending that the other ending offers, i don't really know what else you'd write about.. if it's this one, then may i hope that yunho would have a change of heart and start to question himself whether this feelings for this girl is really love or was he just trying to find his jaejoong in her

[kpopangel]

btw, i agree with some comments up there x) i think jaejoong deserves some new suitors (one would suffice, though) to make yunho re-think and regret *evil me* his decision... ahh..
i can't accept the fact that a girl is part of dbsk.. gahhhh
now that joongie's awake, will she have to leave? or don't tell me she'd replace joongie's position permanently? gah.. or don't make jae become a part of other band or whatever either, will you?

regarding the mirotic mp3, i got it from my friend.. if you don't mind (and you still want the song), maybe you can give me your email add and i'll send it to you? x)

[sahbel]

yes, in this ending, the comeback concert and the bracelet thing was all a dream. tears

and yes, the sequel will continue on from this ending. I agree with what you said. There's not really much I can do after the happy (proper) ending of chapter 13. =) that's why i didn't make it the alternate ending.. lol. and i wouldn't say Rini was part of dbsk, but when i was writing it, i really WAS trying to figure out what would distract the fans alot from JJ's situation, and since we've never seen or had confirmed rumors of the boys having girlfriends, i figured, one of them having a gf would totally flip cassiopeia out. ( i know i really really would flip out if one of them started to go out with a girl) i'd probably die =X i mean nothing. LOL.

Thank you for the offer! Sidmaron (from one of the comments above =]) has kindly provided me a link to a site where i can download the song so i have it now and currently have it on repeat =D (coz it's so hot) lol.

and darling, your reviews are never "rubbish" :) i <3 reading long reviews

[sahbel]

aigoo! *sends the five over with sticky tape and glue to put your heart back together*

yes, the sequel is coming soon! just deciding on whether to f-lock it or not due to adult themes. I suppose i really have to f-lock it coz it's much darker than cfabh... but yes, i don't want to keep talknig and spoil something lol. so i'll shut up. =X LOL.

ngaww! when reading fic, always read angst first and then save the crack for later to cheer you up. lol. (that's what i do. haahha)

thank you so much for your reviews and love! see you in the sequel! hopefully it doesn't disappoint you. :)

gamsahamnida!