Confessions (PART 4)

Nov 26, 2011 03:32

PART 4

February 19th

I can’t believe it. I feel cold and bare inside. My organs hurt from the stuck, scattered pieces of my wrecked heart. My body is numb, my head is spinning. I feel like retching my bones out. I just want to collapse, and not give a damn about anything. But I can’t. I do give a damn. Anthony betrayed me. He left me, at the weakest ( Read more... )

fuff, pg

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michaelangelo24 November 26 2011, 09:01:44 UTC
Should I feel bad that I still suspect Anthony isn't entirely sincere? I won't believe he truly loves Ian until he takes him to prom. ;)

I'm extremely curious and excited about what is meant to happen when he gets home. :D

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saint_elsewhere November 26 2011, 12:52:39 UTC
We'll have to wait and see... teehee ;)

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saint_elsewhere November 26 2011, 12:53:34 UTC
Be patient! I have to work my way up to prom. I have to create as much controversy as possible! :P

And thank you... but a writer is his own worst critic. :)

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vespiquen8 November 26 2011, 09:47:31 UTC
Omg, Thank you posting a new chapter :DD. I'm up right now at 3:30am because I'm sick a little and I couldn't get back to sleep. :/ So I came on my computer to check Fb and Lj. And yay :DD, a new story from you, cheers me up a lot. :)

I don't think Anthony was all sincere either.. :p. I feel he is just kinda using Ian right now :/ And what's supposed to happen when Anthony is supposed to come to his house tonight? Maybe he won't show up? That'll be interesting.. :p

Anyway, I can't wait for next chapter :DD I love stories where they are kids in school but not many people write them. D: Please get the next chapter out as soon as possible! @('.')@ <-it's a monkey, because monkeys are awesome :D

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saint_elsewhere November 26 2011, 12:55:10 UTC
No problem!!
I'm glad my posts cheer you up :) Your comments always make me smile.

We'll see.... ;D

I noticed that not too many people write high-school stories. And I really wanted one. So I decided to write one!
@('.')@ YAY for monkeys!!!

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purpleswag1 November 26 2011, 14:03:34 UTC
hmm i agree with everyone els, i dont think anthony is sincere until he agree to take Ian to prom! lol
other then that great part! :D cant wait for the next! <3

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saint_elsewhere November 26 2011, 18:05:49 UTC
Thank you :) I'm working on the next part atm :)

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mutual_death November 26 2011, 14:46:59 UTC
Obviously Anthony cares more about what people think than Ian. Also he doesn't want to be killed by his dad...So he's using Ian for male-time fun. Eventually he'll fall in love and put Ian's feelings before his own. And take him to prom!!! ;)

Ugh...this story is so interesting....I can't get enough. More dammit!! MORE!

Ok, I'll stop being a pushy jerk...

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saint_elsewhere November 26 2011, 18:06:20 UTC
Anthony is a big douche... :P

Thank you :D
Hahahah. Don't worry. You're pushy enough :)

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