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saint_elsewhere

Ghosts in My Head (Chapter 3) LAST PART.

Dec 20, 2011 01:41

Chapter 3

Ian gulped nervously as he scrutinised Anthony’s crazed and wild look. He could barely recognize the man who was once his best friend and lover as his barren empty eyes darted across the room.

“Why are you doing this?” Ian asked in a shaky and cracking voice, as a broken gasp escaped his lips. He held his head still against his pillow, the ( Read more... )

angst, pg-13, character death, violence, blood

Comments 30

michaelangelo24 December 20 2011, 07:02:23 UTC

That was so sad. :( I guess I don't handle angst very well, especially when one kills the other. The writing was good though. :)

saint_elsewhere December 20 2011, 07:08:56 UTC

It's quite a depressing subject. Thanks for reading :)

michaelangelo24 December 20 2011, 07:12:22 UTC

So should I expect delicious fluff next? ;D

saint_elsewhere December 20 2011, 07:21:20 UTC

Expect the king of all fluffs! Well, maybe not, but I'll try! :P

rahhicecream December 20 2011, 07:57:24 UTC

GOODNESS! What a great story! Really freaking sad, but great :) I didn't think Anthony would actually go through with killing Ian D:

saint_elsewhere December 20 2011, 20:57:29 UTC

Thank you! Neither did I, but the story took me to that conclusion :P

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saint_elsewhere December 20 2011, 20:59:32 UTC

AWW. DON'T CRY!

Thank you so much for reading. I love your comments too much! xD

Fluff for sure! I've made myself totally depressed with this story.

destiel09 December 20 2011, 14:25:42 UTC

Dammit, I'm crying! That was beautiful, sad... but beautiful!! I totally love the end in italic when they promise to never stop loving each others. Damn voice. At least, now they're together in heaven.

saint_elsewhere December 20 2011, 20:59:47 UTC

Thank you for reading <3 And don't cry.

fchapxih13 December 20 2011, 18:19:45 UTC

Damn, that was really freakin' sad. DAMN YOU, ANTHONY. DAMN YOU, VOICE.
Your writing is truly amazing, and I loved this story. You're kind of right about the plot not going anywhere, but I really loved this plot.
The ending was some-what sweet... in a very sick way. Ugh, I need to take a nap now from all this angst.

saint_elsewhere December 20 2011, 21:00:26 UTC

Thank you! hahha. I totally need to take a break after writing this! My mind has been overloaded with depressing thoughts.