Ghosts in My Head (Chapter 3) LAST PART.

[saint_elsewhere]

Chapter 3

Ian gulped nervously as he scrutinised Anthony’s crazed and wild look. He could barely recognize the man who was once his best friend and lover as his barren empty eyes darted across the room.

“Why are you doing this?” Ian asked in a shaky and cracking voice, as a broken gasp escaped his lips. He held his head still against his pillow, the

Comments

[locoforcocoz]

I just made an account to tell you how much I loved this! It's just so perfect, I can't even describe how I feel about this! Argh!

Ah well. Basically, I love this and you are so talented! I hope you keep writing forever!

[saint_elsewhere]

OMG Thank you! :D

I will try!

[vespiquen8]

Yayy! I finally have the time to comment :D

OMG I LOVED IT! ;)

*hands you your favorite kind of Bonbons*

It was sad, but in a good way? idk lolz. I have no idea why I love depressing stories so much. I'm just weird. And none have ever made me cry, :p if one actually does eventually, I'm going to congratulate them :p

The ending was nice, more realistic than a cheesy happy ending. :pp I liked it.

Congratulations, this story has made it into my folder of favorite stories I read over and over :D

Sooo, keep writing! :D (omg, longest comment I think I've even written XD)

[saint_elsewhere]

Thanks for the bonbons! :D

I tried to not make it cheesy. I didn't want it to be like any other story.

Well, I'm honoured :D

[vespiquen8]

You'er welcome :)
Yeahh, it seems like almost every story had a cute happy ending. Nothing wrong with that, just gets tiring after a while :)
Haha, just wanted to say it even though probably no one even cares :p

[9800andseagulls]

Aghhh so sad. But so brilliantly written! Such an alternative to other fics. :3 I'm sad now before bed :/
Super good though!

[saint_elsewhere]

Thank you! I just had to finish it. The thought of Anthony murdering Ian was too depressing for me.

[brady_chaulk]

oh my god that was beautiful and sad i am actually crying , so sad, OH NO the tears are coming back, one.of.my.favorites.

[saint_elsewhere]

Thank you! :D DON'T CRY! IT ISN'T REAL! :P

[hvnlyumbrlla]

This was AMAZING! I really, truly mean it. You did well with characterizing Anthony as a schizophrenic (only thing I saw is that he probably wouldn't relapse into old symptoms as quickly as he did BUT he was triggered by sensitive images and thoughts so it's actually quite possible). I was really hoping for a sad ending (that makes me kinda twisted D:) but I was not disappointed and really loved the ending. I like unorthodox fics such as these. I enjoyed every sentence, my only complaint is that it's over! ;)

[saint_elsewhere]

THANK YOU! (Thanks for the tip!)

I LOVE writing unorthodox fics. It's such a nice change to the usual fluff :P