Ok ok ok ok ok.....ok Wow I just. Where do I even begin. First of all, I'd like to say I'm incredibly honored to have been one of the people that got to see this fic flourish into the beautiful work of art that I just finished reading right now. You don't even understand how excited I was to read each new part every time you told me that you updated it skdjfkllgkmhj. Being out of state during one update was especially painful.
Moving on. This is like..........................perfection. I don't even know how to describe it using coherent english words tbh. It was literally the perfect mix of captivating, emotional, thrilling and if this was a book I wouldn't have been able to put it down. ((Is making it a book out of the question or...?)) I was so satisfied by this like I've been in a dry spell for fic reading lately (as you may have seen me bitch about it on Twitter) and this totally cured it. Like, completely. I'm sitting here all happy and fuzzy and content and just yup.
AND NOW FOR THE FIC ITSELF Nobody is alone in this world.
( ... )
I was aiming for this to feel like a film. I wanted to just let all the imagery flow free (like a river of diarrheinis) and I rushed in some parts because despite taking my time I wanted to finish it
whoo all the angst just,grhihhf I'm so honored you got to read it and I was truly afraid you guys would've been bored with it, or if the diction wasn't advanced enough, but I'm so happy that you like it ;~;
thank you so much! was that you on Twitter talking about it? alas, despite spending months on this I don't think my writing skills did this thing justice. I like it, but then again I'm just meh thank you so much for reading!!!
This was amazing. I'm really at a loss for words but it was amazing. I loved it. And I forgot about the character death warning until that last paragraph so it really shocked me!
Bb, I'm so sorry for taking forever to comment on your fic; it's been sitting open forever and I just kept forgetting about it and trying to think of a good way to phrase this I am the worst friend omfg
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I loved it! Your descriptions were rich and lush throughout, and your use of present tense really helped set the tone of horror and tension. I enjoyed the way you described Kyungsoo and how you've characterized him here, too. The foreshadowing of Kyungsoo's need for his father's approval as the means to the end was particularly nice and the bit with Ryohei was really great. I'm not really sure what else to say that probably hasn't already been said here or elsewhere without rambling, but I really did enjoy this story. (And I say this despite me not really being involved in the EXO fandom.)
You said you were really unsure about how this was going to turn out, but I think you should be proud of it. I didn't really do much to help, but I'm happy to have been there to offer some sort of support! <3
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Wow I just. Where do I even begin.
First of all, I'd like to say I'm incredibly honored to have been one of the people that got to see this fic flourish into the beautiful work of art that I just finished reading right now.
You don't even understand how excited I was to read each new part every time you told me that you updated it skdjfkllgkmhj.
Being out of state during one update was especially painful.
Moving on.
This is like..........................perfection.
I don't even know how to describe it using coherent english words tbh.
It was literally the perfect mix of captivating, emotional, thrilling and if this was a book I wouldn't have been able to put it down.
((Is making it a book out of the question or...?))
I was so satisfied by this like I've been in a dry spell for fic reading lately (as you may have seen me bitch about it on Twitter) and this totally cured it.
Like, completely. I'm sitting here all happy and fuzzy and content and just yup.
AND NOW FOR THE FIC ITSELF
Nobody is alone in this world. ( ... )
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whoo all the angst just,grhihhf
I'm so honored you got to read it and I was truly afraid you guys would've been bored with it, or if the diction wasn't advanced enough, but I'm so happy that you like it ;~;
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can't.
stop.
crying.
i knew he'd end up like that but still ;~~~~; my little bugaboo ;~~~~~~;
-cries an ocean of tears-
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alas, despite spending months on this I don't think my writing skills did this thing justice. I like it, but then again I'm just meh
thank you so much for reading!!!
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And I forgot about the character death warning until that last paragraph so it really shocked me!
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boy when I wrote this it broke me
thank you so much for reading!!!!
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ANYWAY
I loved it! Your descriptions were rich and lush throughout, and your use of present tense really helped set the tone of horror and tension. I enjoyed the way you described Kyungsoo and how you've characterized him here, too. The foreshadowing of Kyungsoo's need for his father's approval as the means to the end was particularly nice and the bit with Ryohei was really great. I'm not really sure what else to say that probably hasn't already been said here or elsewhere without rambling, but I really did enjoy this story. (And I say this despite me not really being involved in the EXO fandom.)
You said you were really unsure about how this was going to turn out, but I think you should be proud of it. I didn't really do much to help, but I'm happy to have been there to offer some sort of support! <3
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