Six Months Later - Part 6

Dec 03, 2007 01:11

Here is another brief chapter. I had hoped to finish (!) this fanfic this weekend, but work came in the way...
I hope you like this! Comments are more than welcome, as always! :)

PS. I finally mastered the art of LJ fake cut (I think). Apologies for cluttering your Friends Pages all this time!

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kawaii_kawaii December 3 2007, 13:02:53 UTC
Thanks for the chapter :D
Aki-chan will met Asami at the party, and he'll see Asami lovey dovey with that Ren, and ...
(Well i dunno, the latter part is yours to make hehe :D)
Update soon ^^

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sakura27 December 3 2007, 22:21:29 UTC
Yes. Confrontation lies ahead. Now I've got to sit down and write it!
:) Update coming soon (hopefully!)

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yosu2 December 3 2007, 13:46:16 UTC
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrr, this again, damn you Asami, what will Aki feel if he sees you all lovey dovey wwith Ren?!! That's it, please, don't make it too easy for Asami to win Aki back, bring Feilong in the scheme, or anyone else, aaaa

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yosu2 December 3 2007, 13:53:22 UTC
or you can make a story like: he sees them all lovey dovey stuff -> it's too much for my Aki to bear -> Asami sees his expression and begin to feel guilty -> Feilong appear (tadaa) -> Aki says "take me away Feilong" -> and they make sure to maka Asami suffer for years (har har) XD

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sakura27 December 3 2007, 22:24:21 UTC
LOL You're so cute! I can imagine the scene: Feilong comes in shining armor, takes Takaba away on his white horse, Asami lies on the ground defeated, lamenting the love now for ever lost...

Where is respicefinem08? We need that Shakespearean melodramatic touch here!

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thousandbirds December 3 2007, 14:08:03 UTC
update soon.

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sakura27 December 3 2007, 22:24:38 UTC
Will try...
Thanks for reading!

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dragonblueanime December 3 2007, 14:52:19 UTC
AHHHHHHHHHHH well there I go falling off your cliffhanger again!!!
Asami really wants to screw himself over with aki-chan
though I know akihito is yet to be over him....
lets go with yosu2's Idea and have Aki see that act between
Ren and asami, but when they are about to make him jealous as all hell
make it seem like he came for feilong and aki would be happy for getting him
out of there (so he would have a relaxed smile that would dazle even a model)
now the tables have turned now asami
Wow not many people would glare dagers at a mafia leaders head
ASAMI HEAD" what the hell are those hands doing on his hips!!! feilong you did so much shit to him and he lets you touch him.... like me!!! I will go over there and get whats mine back by force..." now he realizes ren is still on his arm, aki-chan has disappeared with Feilong!!!!!
Ranting like this is the best big hugs sakura27

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sakura27 December 3 2007, 22:26:18 UTC
LOL I love your ranting! That was so vivid, I could easily picture it!
Yay for hot, steamy jealousy scene and bishies fighting over Akihito!!!

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dragonblueanime December 4 2007, 07:47:49 UTC
you said it!!!!

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