Six Months Later - Part 6

[sakura27]

Here is another brief chapter. I had hoped to finish (!) this fanfic this weekend, but work came in the way...
I hope you like this! Comments are more than welcome, as always! :)

PS. I finally mastered the art of LJ fake cut (I think). Apologies for cluttering your Friends Pages all this time!

Disclaimer: I do not own Viewfinder.

As the black limo

Comments

[solarisstar]

I applaud Akihito for trying to move on, but Asami is not going to make it easy. I wonder if you have another male character hit on Akihito, that would probaly make Asami wonder?Hmm... oh endless possibilties where you are going with this fic.

[sakura27]

I agree, there is heated confrontation coming up. But until I've written it, I don't know exactly how it will come out...
thanks for reading!

[yosu2]

it would be good if Aki's eyes turn cold when seeing Asami and Ren, it's to make the bastard panick (har har)

[sakura27]

Oooooh, that'd be interesting. If Akihito gets cold, how would Asami react? Would it be with fire? Or with even more ice?

par

[starawings]

I don't like ren one bit! *kicks Ren* Please hurry with the next part! I can hardly wait!

Re: par

[sakura27]

LOL How can you treat an uber-handsome model that harshly?
*winks*
I'll try to update as soon as possible! thanks for reading!

[paranoia_woman]

You go Takaba and make sure you remember those words when you see him later that night. I enjoyed this shorty but goodie. Thanks

[sakura27]

Yeah, seriously!
I'm glad you enjoyed this! More coming up soon(-ish).

[lilt_rill]

Have to admit, my eyes keep drifting back to "Geez, ties are such a hassle!" I'd love to see Asami's reaction to that thought...

The contrast in the two parts is lovely too: how for Asami, a show of need is looking around a room for one person and for Akihito, it's being unproductive. They're different people but feeling similiar things...

[sakura27]

LOL Yes, how about a (kinky smex-loaded) omake based on that one sentence? :P

Thanks so much for reading! Sorry to hear about your stolen stuff. It's a horrible hassle...

[lilt_rill]

Oooh... you shouldn't offer me temptation like that when I'm attempting to put off writing a paper. Let's see... I don't know if it'll be exactly what you were thinking, but I feel like I've been neglecting someone important in my writing of late:

“I don’t understand the point of these nooses.” Fei Long looked distastefully at the ties that Akihito had spread out on the bed. Akihito joined him in glaring at the pieces of silk.

“I never have either.” His eyes darkened. Fei Long raised an eyebrow. Akihito met his gaze and after a minute gave a half shrug. “He used them to tie me up.” He admitted. Fei Long’s eyes widened and then he glanced at the ties.

“That’s a much better use for them.” He said and smirked. Akihito crossed his arms over his chest.

“No.” He stated. Fei Long pouted.

“You don’t want to tie me up?” He asked. Akihito’s eyes widened and he pictured Fei Long, hands tied together to the headboard, face relaxed and flushed in pleasure as Akihito sucked him…

He staunched his nosebleed in one of the ties.

[sakura27]

OMG This is terrific!!! *falls off the chair*

[ulvinden]

wohooooo. looking forwart to the next chapter^^
love your work
*hugs*
Le

[sakura27]

I'll try to update as soon as possible! Thanks for reading!
*hugs back*