Six Months Later - Part 12

Dec 23, 2007 18:26



When Shangan Hotel’s Golden Ballroom explodes with wild applause and loud cries of approbation, a deep sigh of relief escapes the wide chest of the yakuza. As much as he loves expensive cloths and signature accessories, he can’t stand the boredom of the runaway or, in fact, the poor taste of untalented designers, such as Mijaki-sensei. Focus, ( Read more... )

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sueona December 23 2007, 23:46:53 UTC
This was great! I'm so glad that Ren go what he deserved! Please let Akihito be all right and he believes Asami. Such a good story and can't wait for an update! :D

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sakura27 December 23 2007, 23:53:41 UTC
Glad you liked it!!!
Now it's your turn to update!!!! XD

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sueona December 24 2007, 00:05:57 UTC
Yep, your story is great!

There will be a side story for Holiday Surprise since how the story is going, I won't be able to get the Christmas day in the story. So, watch out for the side story which I'll try my best to get up tonight. :D

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sakura27 December 24 2007, 00:15:57 UTC
YAY! I'll be checking my PC regularly! :)

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kaza85 December 24 2007, 00:02:05 UTC
ahh interesting, though I kinda wish Ren got a bit more punishment, and no Im not thinking dirty minded :P
Though now I wonder, what is going to happen nxt hm :)

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sakura27 December 24 2007, 00:12:38 UTC
Heh, I hear you kaza85! I initially planned a torture scene (beating, not sex) for Ren, but then I figured that Asami would probably want to avoid the scandal of violence against Ren who is already a public figure and just went public about their "relationship". Plus our man has more urgent things in mind right now...
Thanks for reading!!! :)

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sommar December 24 2007, 00:28:54 UTC
YAY! update! And a brilliant one tooo XD
*squees over Asami running to Takaba*
YAY!

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sakura27 December 24 2007, 00:35:23 UTC
*joins the happy squee*

Glad you liked it! :)

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usersauba December 24 2007, 00:34:14 UTC
The story is getting emotional and I like that. Sorry, I haven't commented before but I did follow your story closely and enjoyed it very much.

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sakura27 December 24 2007, 00:37:12 UTC
It's great to hear that you are enjoying my fic! I hope you'll enjoy what's coming next just as much!
Thank you so much for reading!!!! :)

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sakura27 December 24 2007, 00:49:24 UTC
*bows* thank you very much!!! I am very glad you are enjoying my story! :)

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