VF fiction (Asami x Akihito)

Oct 25, 2011 19:22

Hi everyone. I bring you a fic that deals with the aftermath of the Onsen Incident (see Finder no Netsujou Extra Limited Edition)
Warning: OOC-ness (or maybe not???) and lack of smex!

I'll Cherish You )

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radcat38 October 25 2011, 23:56:15 UTC
This is so on target and so them. I can see them having this conversation afer coming home from the onsen. Thanks for putting it into words for me and everyone else. Nice work!! I love them in love...

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sakura27 October 27 2011, 01:37:41 UTC
Thank you so much! Glad you found this convincing!

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Thanks kaori80 October 26 2011, 01:37:39 UTC
I lovvvvvvve it, I can so see that happening. It's sad that the series had to end. It's one of my favorite manga. Two Big Thumbs up

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Re: Thanks sakura27 October 27 2011, 01:37:55 UTC
Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed it!

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cl3f41ry October 26 2011, 01:38:55 UTC
I like it. It is so like them ^v^

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sakura27 October 27 2011, 01:38:07 UTC
Thank you for reading and commenting!

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ickyickypoopoo October 26 2011, 01:40:20 UTC
aaawwww that's cute... love that Asami finally lost his iron clad composure ^-^

I hope the actual series turn out like this.

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sakura27 October 27 2011, 01:39:35 UTC
Me too...

Thanks so much for reading!

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yukishu4ever October 26 2011, 02:19:01 UTC
I was so immersed that I did not realize the fic had ended. I really enjoyed your fic, I think it expressed their feelings perfectly. I'd love to see more fics from You even if they are short BUT a longer fic would make me really happy. Thanks for sharing it =D

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sakura27 October 27 2011, 01:39:57 UTC
I'm so glad you enjoyed it so much! Thanks for leaving a comment!

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