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sakura27

After Six Months - Part 2

Nov 20, 2007 22:09

Thank you all so much for your encouraging comments!!! I hope you enjoy Part 2 just as much; please let me know what you think. It's a shorter piece (it's been a busy day) but still angsty. Apologies in advance for any grammar or spelling mistakes (English is not my native tongue).

Disclaimer: I don't own Viewfinder.

His gaze wanders on the marble ( Read more... )

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Comments 45

respicefinem08 November 21 2007, 03:52:26 UTC

WAAH you updated!
I can feel the pain! poor Aki... but I can kinda understand why Asami did it though

sakura27 November 21 2007, 15:33:27 UTC

Yeah, poor Aki... He deserves a happy end one way or another, don't you think? ;)

respicefinem08 November 21 2007, 22:44:53 UTC

yeah definitely!

mrk33 November 21 2007, 04:24:15 UTC

This is too much I see the point, but damn, must he be so cruel. *waits for the next update*

sakura27 November 21 2007, 15:34:16 UTC

Sorry if this was too much. I can't resist the angst once I start writing...
Thanks so much for reading!!! Stay tuned for Part 3...

kaza85 November 21 2007, 05:19:30 UTC

poor Aki, that definetly would have been painful for him especially since he'd know that Asasmi would have known that he'd see them. I really hope he has a good reason for this and can't wait to read more to see how Aki copes, (hopefully someone helps to heal him) :)

sakura27 November 21 2007, 15:36:17 UTC

Thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment!!! :) More coming up soon!

illusionwish November 21 2007, 05:37:22 UTC

You T.O.R.T.U.R.E.D poor Akihito! (I like it though =X)
Asami is such an enigma, though he should understand that if his heart still longs for Akihito (he DOES right!?), no matter how far he tries to seperate them physically, their hearts will still find a way to get the two closer to each other. The chapter was short but rich in content, I get a little hint of what's going on here. Keep up the good work!

sakura27 November 21 2007, 15:39:24 UTC

I am SORRY!!! *on her knees, begging for forgiveness*
I didn't mean to torture Aki! It's not my fault he's a gentle uke with a sensitive heart, deeply in love with an enigmatic yakuza! :)

Thanks so much for reading!

kaza85 November 21 2007, 05:43:00 UTC

"As on his way to the bathroom he bumps into a chair. Ouch! When did I put this here? Damn."
hmm was he secretly there, sitting on that couch?
anyway excellent, can't wait for more.

sakura27 November 21 2007, 15:12:19 UTC

Maybe... *wink*