Comments | sakusei_sol: Sweet thaaang

sakusei_sol

Sweet thaaang

May 15, 2007 16:55

Random. Totally random. Written while watching Avalon in 3rd period (strange movie). Enjoy, My Lave. xD;

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sojourner_cries May 19 2007, 02:10:18 UTC

Swwwwwwwwweeeeeeeeet. <333 Loved the ending, as usual :) . Poor strawberries! :P
I am going to comment on the other two now as well, yes. I don't really understand the "Tanker Love," but the imagery is lovely. And I just adore "A Heart," especially the dialogue. You write snippits well.

sakusei_sol May 19 2007, 02:39:59 UTC

Hehehee.
:3 Tanker Love is Tanzie (the girl, younger of the two by ten years but also the more dominant in the relationship) observing Kadei's phoenix tattoo while he sleeps (Kadei being the boy, older but more submissive of the two. That's basically the whole point. xD;

sojourner_cries May 19 2007, 02:45:25 UTC

Ooooooh. I thought that we were talking literal phoenixs and shapeshifting. *rereads* I can see it now :) .

sakusei_sol May 19 2007, 04:24:33 UTC

xD My intention was to make people think it was actually a bird she was examining.

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