[FIC] Star Trek: What We Need to See [8/8] (Kirk/Bones, R)

[salvaged_pride]

Title: What We Need to See [8/8]
Authors: salvaged_pride and sullacat
Artist: gadgetorious
Fanmixer: dizilla
Beta: shinychimera
Series: Star Trek XI
Characters/Pairings: Kirk/McCoy
Rating: R
Chapter Word Count: 1791 out of 42601
Summary: Jim is everything he needs to be when he's sent on a diplomatic mission to meet a potential new addition to the Federation - charming, calm, convincing - especially

Comments

[anruiukimi]

Very nice! :D Misunderstandings, dead crew, and Jim getting thrashed (like usual,) make for an interesting tale, and you've done a great job. :) Thank you! I liked the aliens too...very creative. :D

PS: You have some coding issues in the first few chapters with oddly sized text and stuff, just to let you know. ;)

[salvaged_pride]

Thank you so much! We were hoping it would read similar to an episode. I'm glad you like the aliens. ^_^

I went through the first chapters but couldn't find anything at all wrong with them. Are you using a particular CSS style or LJ's default?

[anruiukimi]

:D

I just checked again, and it's fine. It was probably an lj glitch or something. Sorry for the trouble! ^^;

[avictoriangirl]

Oh, I can't tell you how much I loved this! H/C and angst and just the right amount of sweetness. *happy sigh* Will definitely be reccing! ♥

[salvaged_pride]

Thank you so much for reading and any future reccing! <3~

[nikaratrenal]

What a fun story! It had a great, action filled plot and a wonderful emotional core. You dealt with the injury in great ways, and really kept all of the characters true to themselves. Thanks for such a great romp!

[secretsolitaire]

I enjoyed this very much! The plot was fantastic, including Ruud and the two security guards (I liked that they had some personality and it was clear Jim cared about them), and the Jim/Bones developments were sweet and believable. I could see their misunderstanding coming and I groaned! Glad to see Jim's sight starting to come back, and to see that things turned out well for Ruud. Yay!

[vivid_moment]

Holy Moses, my brain just melted because that was brilliantly hot. And the dialogue and concept, how they were with each other is just genius ... all of it. Beautiful!

*wanders off, dazed*

♥

[salvaged_pride]

Much ♥ right back at you! Thank you so much for your compliment and for reading!