Hi people. I need constructive criticism on this. I feel like towards the end it starts to lose it's feel. The prologue is a dream sequence, which is meant to be all crazy and not make too much sense, and when he's awake it's supposed to make more sense. I don't know if you understand on what I'm saying, just please, tell me honestly what you think ( Read more... )

So. My refund check came. Positives: it's 427 dollars, 300 more than I thought. Negatives: It's made out to some douche bag named Holmes D Holmes. I know for a fact that when I filled out the form, I didn't put my name as Holmes D Holmes. In fact, I specifically remember seeing that I DID put my last name in the wrong spot, and changed it. So if ( Read more... )

Greetings all, I've decided to take up Baha'i. In other news, the apple I just ate may have been older than I thought. See you at the hospital!

So I'm back. Sorry for not giving a warning. I need somewhere to vent my adult angst.

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Wailing Paddle S: go to sleep ( Read more... )

i've been sick for a few days. dont know if i should see a doctor or not.

i think i might have to.. something about this seems not good.

I had to write a descriptive narrative for english.

( The monster of a paper. )

this is a page i did for homework (lol not even a report. what a fucking pain.) for music technology ( Read more... )

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