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New Year drabble - ByaRen

Jan 08, 2010 15:16

[Characters]: Abarai Renji, Kuchiki Byakuya, Kuchiki Hikaru and Kuchiki Kaoru
[Pairing]: Byakuya/Renji (ByaRen)
[Summary]: Renji's been absent from home for too long.
[Word Count]: ~1900
[Finished]: 07.January.2010
[Beta]: not beta-read
[Warnings]: Implied Male-Pregnancy | Sex | Angst | Fluff
[Rating]: R
[Notes]: Hikaru is about 9/10 years old and Kaoru is ( Read more... )

^slash, .hikaru, :renbya, fanfic, .kaoru, *eng

Comments 23

theablackthorn January 8 2010, 15:46:33 UTC

It's good to be home. Lovely darlin' :D

marinliliz January 8 2010, 16:42:25 UTC

It certainly is, especially with this family waiting. Thank you♥

gokuma January 8 2010, 16:24:54 UTC

I think I'd be even more angry than Byakuya. I'd blast Renji with Senbonzakura or something. Or carve "You won't forget about sending hell butterflies" on his back. Two weeks? It's such long time. I'd be out of my mind after one day.

...And that's why I can't be a Shinigami captain mumdad, I guess. The fic was awesome. And I find the roles' reversal (being a mumdad doesn't make you UKE) hot :D

marinliliz January 8 2010, 16:54:32 UTC

It must be very complicate to manage all of it but it's Byakuya, he will accomplish it with a sneer. The problem this time I think were the children and their puppy-dog eyes asking everyday for 2 weeks: "Where's dad!" otherwise he wouldn't have mentioned a thing to RenjiXD

"being a mumdad doesn't make you UKE" It most certainly does not and I never liked role definitions; your start as an uke you'll be an uke for all your life, I don't think that's healthy>.<

Thank you. *hugs wolf*

p.s.: Have 2 more drabbles to post todayXDDDD

gokuma January 8 2010, 18:32:45 UTC

You're unbelievable, birthday girl ^___^

marinliliz January 8 2010, 19:05:27 UTC

^________^ It's just a couple of small drabbles. A HitsuRen and a HikaSusu. They deserve a New Year too.

bya_sama January 8 2010, 17:11:06 UTC

Ow! So cute and....mouth-watering! Thanks a lot for this one. I do like stories about Renji and Byakuya. AND it made my smile to come back, so I'm doubly gratful. ;)

marinliliz January 8 2010, 17:34:02 UTC

Mouth-watering is good.^__^ Renji and Byakuya are definitely my OTP. I'm glad you returned to enjoy them.

Thank you

gymnasticsbaby January 9 2010, 05:04:31 UTC

aww Byakuya is really adorable when mad and so strong for his kids too. Renji was awful to make them all wait. I do like how they reaqaunted though. Oh! And Happy Birthday!

marinliliz January 9 2010, 21:11:10 UTC

Thanks! Byakuya has always been strong and I guess having children only increased this. And well, Renji couldn't really help it, neh?

iristigerlily January 9 2010, 05:25:03 UTC

Very nice! I loved the role reversal and the whole fic had a wonderful loving feeling to it.

And I love angry!Byakuya :D

marinliliz January 9 2010, 21:25:55 UTC

Thanks! Role-reversal is always interesting and I can't see Byakuya setting himself for uke his whole life; there's too much power yielding for him to accept it.